Rise of Kaizeek

Subject: Rise of Kaizeek Fri Sep 10, 2010 1:23 am

Sêdo,Kaizeek

General Information
Name: Kaizeek

Nickname: Kai

Gender: Male

Body Type: Average

General Appearance. I am just a normal or as close to normal i can consider of a guy. Im 18 years of age and have white spikey messy hair. I wear my usual attire as a white vest, a white jacket, black baggy pants and sandles for i have many of these. I always wear my charm because it is very dear to me. It is a black madallion that my parents gave me before they died. i have green eyes but the tend to change color from green to blue and every color in between. I keep my katana slung over my shoulder. I also hide kunai in my sleave. And i also wear a sash under my vest.

Personality: Im an easy going kinda guy. If you are choosing to take thought into getting to know me then shoot for it. There are many personal traits on which a friend or so will only know. I need freinds lots of them enemies are over rated anyways. I like to protect my friends and those who are close to me. If anyone attepts to hurt the family i have now i will retaliate with force. I lost family already and dont plan on it again. I am always serious in dire situations. And alas i love to party. The only reason i would attempt to fight without cause would be to kill my village's murderers. I choosse to keep my cool in a battle but if things get serious so do I. I dont let my feelings get in the way of anything unless it is Xiao-Xiao.

Other: I am in a loving relationship with Xiao-Xiao.
Family: Kana, Gintoki, Crowe, Xiao-Xiao and More yet to discover.

Age: 18

Height: 5'6"

Weight: 164lb

Likes: I like cold winter mornings and warm summer nights. I like to party and make new friends. I also like to learn new things anything u have to teach i would love to learn. I like to hang out with family most.

Dislikes: I dont really like to fight or start problems. i dont like mean people or procrastinators. I also really dont like getting my white clothes all dirty with anything other then blood cause blood is a trophy. If you choose to be my enemy it is your lose i am a good ally to have.

~Bio~
Spoiler:
Ninja Information
Village: Blood

Rank: Kage

Elements: Bloodline: Lightning, Void
Main: Wind, Fire, Earth
Combonation: Sol
Void: This is generally considered to be even Darker And Edgier than Darkness. Generally involves erasing things from existence, whether via black hole, draining Life Energy, or simply making them Cease To Be. Rarely has an opposing element.

Jutsu:

Spoiler:

Name:Substitution
Rank: E
Type: Suplementary
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant an animal, or even another person within reach if strong enough to do so, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name:Transformation
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja. A Ninja or passerby may know this is a fake by seemingly knowing things about the portrayed person. Whyby asking questions and such that only the accual person would know.

Name:Clone
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates a replica of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by those with a kekagenkai that allows them to see chakra. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement.

Name: Rope Untying
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A basic Techniqe taught at the Ninja Academy, this techniqe allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

Name:Release
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description:a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handsigns, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After coming in direct contact with the target who they chose to release and placing there hands upon ther body and forcing chakra into them.

Name:Movement Technique
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an a blinding speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user is a streak of color passing by. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.

Name:Tree Climbing
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control
Element: N/A
Description:the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. It allows the ninja to run up trees and walk on vertical walls and even ceilings if of a higher rank. This ability is only available to the ninja who learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body.

Name:Water Walking
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control
Element: N/A
Description:the art of water walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.

Name:Stealth Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description:the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible.

Sedo jutsus:

Name: Elemental Concentration
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Range: Short
Element: (Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water or Fire; depending on your element)
Description: Elemental Concentration is a jutsu that teaches a young sedo how to concentrate there chakra to specific areas of there body. In this case the hand. When a sedo concentrates his or her efforts in sending chakra to there hand it causes them to enhance there own strikes with the power of there elemnet and chakra. For example if there element is fire, there strikes become burn inducing. For wind, more defensive, causing objects at a weight of a small human or less (160lbs - )to be pushed back a little once making contact. Earth, causes more impactful strikes, meaning the damage to the object is higher than that of a normal incounter. Lightning, causes an after shock, so one normal strike with this jutsu is like two repetative ones. Water concentration effects are the the sedo's strikes are equivalent to a strong current or tide. AS Sedo can create a original D rank jutsu based on this jutsu with proper training.

Name: Elemental Concentration Sphere
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Range: Mid
Element: (Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water or Fire; depending on your element)
Description: Elemental Concentration Sphere is a jutsu that goes one step further than the basic Elemental Concentration. Elemental Concentration Sphere is an ability where the sedo continues to concentrate the chakra with in there hand. As the do so they move there arm in a manner where it seems as though they are tossing a ball. Upon the arm being most extented they release the chakra. If done corect the elemntal chakra should detach from the shinobi and be sent in the direction of the way they were face and therefore tossed it. This jutsu is called Elemental Concentration Sphere because the momentum of the toss sends the emlemntal chakra spinning, forming it into a sphere like shape. The elemental effects are the same as the ones of Elemental Concentration. AS Sedo can create a original D rank jutsu based on this jutsu with proper training.

Name: Elemental Concentration Dual Hand and Sphere
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Range: Short - Mid
Element: (Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water or Fire; depending on your element)
Description: The next step in a sedo's training is learning to multi task. Meaning striking with a elemental chakra from your fist as well as tossing a Elemental Concentration with your fist. This comes in handy with combonations and is a very good offencive move for any AS. Just as in Elemental Concentration, you concentrate the chakra in one hand. However you need to divide the concentration into both hands now. With one hand strike the target and with the other toss the sphere as you would with Elemental Concentration Sphere. AS Sedo can create a original D rank jutsu based on this jutsu with proper training.

Name: Elemental Concentration Full Arm Strike
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: E
Range: Short
Element: (Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water or Fire; depending on your element)
Description: Elemental Concentration Full Arm Strike is a stronger version of Elemental Concentration. With this jutsu the Sedo concentrates his or her chakra in two areas, as they learned with Elemental Concentration Dual Hand and Sphere. However, they concentrate there respective elemental chakra into both intire arms. Having there own chakra inhance there uper limb muscles, joints and bones as well as tissue. In short there whole entire arm(s) are intwined with there element. This causes there arms to make stronger hits. With there element having the same effect as in Elemental Concentration, just in a wider span. That span being there entire arm, from shoulder to tip of finger. AS Sedo can create a original D rank jutsu based on this jutsu with proper training.

Name: Elemental Concentration Full Arm Defence
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: E
Range: Short
Element: (Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water or Fire; depending on your element)
Description: Elemental Concentration Full Arm Defence is an ability a sedo learns to protect themselves from offensive attacks from an opposer. When a Sedo is in close range win hand-to-hand combat they can utilize the same concentration they use in Elemental Concentration Full Arm Strike. However, instead of attacking, in defence they place there arms infront of the oncoming attack. Elemental Concentration Full Arm Defence is a low rank self defence. The effects are different for each element. With lightning the opposer is also shocked upon impact, so the opposer can not use full force. Wind pushes light weight opposers back, also creating let force from the foe. Earth's anility is the sedo dose not get pushed back, and the damage is lees than non sedo shinobi. Water is also more powerful and pushes the foe slightly back as the way wind does, however the impact is almost the same, a little less. Fire burns the foe on contact causing damage with each strick to the sedo's defence. AS Sedo can create a original D rank jutsu based on this jutsu with proper training.

Name: Elemental Concentration Steps
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Range: Short
Element: (Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water or Fire; depending on your element)
Description: As a Sedo concentrates chakra in there feet there steps change. With Lightning and wind concentration there steps become swifter. With Earth, they become more powerful shaking the earth 1 foot all around them with each step. Water causes there steps to be more steady as the river flows. Fire causes there steps to increase in number excelling there speed. This jutsu helps in increasing speed for all elements except for Earth and water. Water becomes more capable of balance, even on moving terain and Earth can effect any thing in it's short range by causing it to shake and there fore stumble, however since the earth element causes heavier steps the sedo does not fall because they are weighed down. AS Sedo can create a original D rank jutsu based on this jutsu with proper training.

Name: Elemental Concentration Step Kick
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: E
Range: Short
Element: (Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water or Fire; depending on your element)
Description: Elemental Concentration Step Kick utalizes the chakra concentration learned with Elemental Concentration Full Arm Strike. However instead of concentration focus on the uper limbs they are concentrated on the lower ligaments. Meaning of course the legs. With heavy concentration on centering the chakra within the legs they become stronger. The effects of lightning are a after shock, meaning upon conttact it is a though two hits were made, not only this the actual strikes are quicker causing the capabilty of swift combonations. The effects of wind step kick are very swift motions with in the legs as well as a forceful impact pushing the light targets, 160 or less, back a 3 feet or so. Earth kicks are very impactful causing high damage and coinciding with concentration steps can be utalized well, meaning as the target is already stumbling from the affects of the earth step, kick the target knocking them over. The effects of a water step kick are very steady which is useful to the shinobi using it. The water elemental step kick can be aimed well due to its steadiness causing high precison. Fire step kicks cause high damage and burns to all targets it comes in contact with. AS Sedo can create a original D rank jutsu based on this jutsu with proper training.

Name: Rain of Stones
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: Medium
Rank: D
Description: The sedo consentrates chakra to lift small chuncks of earth surronding the user and it is sent into the air, ment to rain down upon the opponent.

Name: Water Wall
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: D
Description: The Sedo consentrates chakra in a form of a water wall. This said wall can used as defense as it is 4 feet thick. When this jutsu is being used the concentration of water is as a raging river. However it does not move while being used in defense. The user although can push the chakra and there for wall towards there target. As well as this it can be wraped around them in a dome like form. Enough force can get through this wall. Though doing so will slow down anything passing through. Note: Imagine walking against a strong current, those are the effects.

Name: Gust
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: Short
Rank: D
Description: The sedo concentrates chakra in the form of wind. The sedo creates a sphere around themselves. This allows them to deflect any propelled objects towards them; ex kunai, shuriken, propelled jutsus, hari, senbon and any other objects of this nature. This jutsu is usless against large objects; ex swords, large propelled jutsus, windmill shuriken, boulders, and people of course.

Name: Bomb Shot
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Range: Far
Rank: D
Description: Shoots a fire ball at high speed that upon impact explodes.

Name: Sensor Mine
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Any basic; water, wind, fire and earth.
Range: None
Rank: C
Description: A sedo concentrates chakra, that of there element, with there hand. For each element you will need a source in order to place the miine of the set element. For water you must be on water earth be on land. For wind mines the user must focus chakra into the air this mine will be unseen by all except the user who can normally sense their own chakra. Fire must use fire to plant the mine which normally doesnt work. People avoid fire not walk through it. The sensor mine explodes when someone gets in range of the mine. Its set range is on the ground on the surface of water and in the air or fire once within 5 feet of the mine it detonates exploding damaging the opponent who would normally not expect it.

Normal Jutsus:

Fire Ball Jutsu
Element: Fire
Range: Medium
Rank: D
Description: Throw a 1 foot in diamiter Fire Ball At the target may cause 3rd degree burn.

Flaming Sword Jutsu
Element: Fire
Range: Close
Rank: D
Description: Engulfs Katana In Fire.

Blazing Bullet Jutsu
Element: Fire
Range: Medium
Rank: C
Description: Hurl a 4 foot in diamiter Fire ball of emense heat at the target may cause 2nd degree burn and set opponent aflame.

Solar Flare
Element: Sol
Range: Far
Rank: A
Description: A burst of emense heat that can burn and set fire to a large area. Solar Flare is bright enough to possibly blind players if they look directly at the Flare. User is not effected by the blindness nor is anyone else if they close there eyes when looking at it.

Earthquake
Element:Earth
Range:Long
Rank:S
Description: Causes an eathquake that slows or stops enemies movements throwing them off balance. The Earthquake causes massive damage to the set area. The user punches the ground which causes a great earthquake to happen.

Blinding Light
Element:Sol
Range:mid
Rank:S
Description:Causes a Blinding light that is as bright as the sun itself but is up close and personal. The user will not get blinded by this jutsu but will be slightly dim visioned. The target however may become blind if they keep there eyes open for too long. Blinding light also makes it impossible for the opponent to see the user with the naked eye.

Scorching Earth
Element:Fire, Earth
Range:Mid
Rank:S
Description:Causes the surrounding ground to become too hot to stand on for any opponents that can get burned. Standing on the earth for too long may eventuallly set clothing ablaze.

Firey Feast
Element:Fire
Range:Long
Rank:S
Description:Creates a Flaming dragon that seaks out and attempts to engulf the target/s. The dragon can only be canceled by S rank water Jutsu's. Causes 1st degree burns oon target who is hit.

Reflective barrier
Element:Wind
Range:Self
Rank:S
Description:Reflects any propelled object Jutsu or weapon up too S Rank. This jutsu is a powerful wind barrier which acts like a sheild. But looks like a tornado surounding the user.

Void Tansport
Rank:S
Element:Void
Range:Chosen destination
Discription: The user creates a Wormhole like portal that when the user enters it they can transport to a disired location almost instantaniously. As long as th user knows the location he is transporting to, as in seeing it on maps and knowing the path to his destination. If the user does not know the location they will be transported anywhere in the world. The user can get stuck inside the wormhole portal, due to lack of chakra, however he can return if this happens by resting with in this void for some odd number of days, for kages it is 24hrs.

Void Destruction
Rank:S
Element:Void
Range:Mid
Discription: A blackhole forms infront of the user, about 4 feet in diameter. The effect of the blackhole has a suction power that can suck up anything 500lbs or less. The more objects the blackhole absorbs it grows bigger in diameter. Anything sucked into the Blackhole can only be released by the user himself.

Rank: S
Element:Void
Range:Short
Description:Over my time training as a Kage, I developed a series of jutsus using a Void like Chakra. The end result was the Strike from the Void, a set of six jutsus based on the principle of sealing off Chakra. Each of the six techniques is capable of sealing off one or more elemental chakras. This in turn prevents the target from using the jutsu associated with that element for a short duration. Each is named after the element is seals.
Seal Swords

Sword of the Void: Thunderseal Sword
Sword of the Void: Waterseal Sword
Sword of the Void: Fireseal Sword
Sword of the Void: Earthseal Sword
Sword of the Void: Windseal Sword

108 Seals

The final sword techniqu is a "trump card" Sword of the Void: 108 Seals. Using this sixth technique, I slash the opponent 108 times, sealing off all elemental chakra. The sealing effect is often superfluous, as the technique is usually fatal. Due to the extreme chakra consumption, I will use one of the sealing swords above, only unleasing the 108 Seals if I have no other options.

Bloodline: Sêdo

Clan: Sêdo

Personal Information
Habits: Cleaning and sharpening my fathers Katana, Talking to people everywhere, Attempting to Negotiate when a problem arises.

Weaknesses: Random Flashbacks of my family ands friends dead bodies. Looking at my Madallion in memory of my parents. Xiao-Xiao. High ranked water jutsu. People who plan the battle before it begins as a genious.

Strengths: Friends i care about. Xiao-Xiao. Fire Elements. Never giving up. Protecting those who are close to me. KenJutsu. Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, and Genjutsu are equal in my teachings.

Fears: Losing my fathers katana, lossing my Parents Madallion, lossing Xiao-Xiao

Subject: Re: Rise of Kaizeek Fri Sep 10, 2010 1:23 am

Reasoning for request for jounin level i am very experienced at RPing for i have been doing so for 8 years and within that experience is Dungeons & Dragons in Which i am The DM or Dungeon Master in where i describe the entire story in indept details for the players to depict exactly what i do with ever detil exact down to the smallest pebble in a street packed full of people if you would like to test me before approving me to rank up to jounin i would love to RP with you to show my worth the main reason i am Requesting this is because i am the Co-Founder of the Sedo Clan and i would wish to become jounin as a leader of the clan and to rank up higher then that i will have to still do the required missions starting from genin level all the way up to kage if im lucky. plz take this into consideration plz and think of how it would help my clan and if need be Pm me about me showing my worth as a Jounin to you and i willl RP with you if you would like.

Subject: Re: Rise of Kaizeek Fri Sep 10, 2010 2:40 am

Bloodline: Mazengai? Wtf is that? xD

Anyway, I have no problem with you being jonin. But you've been too vague in your personality. You just generalized yourself as being 'easy-going'. You haven't, for example, stated the kind of people you like being with. Having lots of friends is something many people want.

Also, your 'many personal traits' have to be elaborated on. I know it sounds irritating to do so, but it's only cuz some people leave their profiles generalized as yours, and then start becoming different people with different attitudes suiting their preferences; and we can't say anything to such people because their profile just gives a general description of them.

Write at least a few words on everything; whether you like to be with family or friends, what kind of weather you prefer to be in, what your village means to you, to what extent you would do things for your friends / Xiao-Xiao, how you would act in formal occasions in contrast with informal occasions, etc. Those are just examples; you can add in things you want to. ^^

It's only to make yourself more unique, and also to make it easier for mods to decide who's right or wrong when someone comments on your RP style. You can't do things in RP that you haven't stated possible in your profile.

Also, you can't use jutsu in RP unless you've created them in your profile. Please follow that guideline. <3

You have a Fireball jutsu and a Blazing Bullet jutsu; both are D-rank, but one is stronger than the other. I'd suggest you make the Bullet jutsu C-rank to avoid controversy.

Otherwise, you have full proof of your expertise in RPing; a few typing errors here and there, but nothing too serious. Your bio becomes interesting after reading through it for quite a while; eventful yet to the point. The way you cloaked the identity of your village's killers was marvelous. It lets people be part of your bio-storyline without following any strict particulars. But, sadly, you haven't mentioned anything about your clan in your bio. It has to be mentioned, because I'm sure it's not a family-wise bloodline. If it were a family based bloodline, then Xiao-Xiao would be your cousin, not your love. xD

Then again, you'll probably include the creation of the Sedo clan in the Sedo History thread, so forget about it,

Your profile is fine to me.

Thank you. <3

Subject: Re: Rise of Kaizeek Fri Sep 10, 2010 12:43 pm

Thank you Yakate i will get on that and re edit all i need too and add what is needed. but as for me and Xiao i will have to figure out a way for us not to be related yet have the abilities. rofl but we made the clan shortly after i made my profile rofl so ill work on that k ^_^ Ty

Subject: Re: Rise of Kaizeek Sun Sep 12, 2010 2:27 pm

Accepted no jutsu xD

Subject: Re: Rise of Kaizeek Mon Sep 20, 2010 5:39 am

Two custom elements? o-o I guess it's okay.

And next time, just post in your profile to say you've updated it. D: Accepted again~

Subject: Re: Rise of Kaizeek Tue Sep 21, 2010 12:20 pm

ty Yakate

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