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 New and improved maru

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Maru "Wolf" Ekisho


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PostSubject: New and improved maru   Mon Aug 03, 2009 7:27 pm


Name: Maru Yurizaki

Gender: Male

Village: Nightmare

Rank: Kage

Age: 32

Height: 6'1

Element: Water , wind
Combo element: Ice and Mist


Ice and Water pro-suit hound: Hounds created from water and ice with properties of the best ninja hounds everywhere they can comunicate with Maru just simple by barking because Maru understands the language of wolves.

Number and restrictions: All 5 can be summon at one time.
Abilities: Wolves excel in speed, slyness and searching of enemies
Delta formation (Dogs get into a delta formation and prepare for a prestigious attack)

Summonings jutsu:

Hypnotic howl:
Type: Genjustu
Distance: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Effects: Paralysis, mind corruption
Description: The dogs surround the user and howl spreading a paralyzing song. This song sends the opponent into a genjustu for pro-suit dog torture. After hypnotic howl is used the wolves dissipate after because this justu take pushes them to the limit.

Soul shareing
Type: unknown
Distance: Can only be used if dogs are in delta formation
Element: nonw
Description: The beats of the hearts of all the wolves and the user merge together allowing the user to transfer bodies with the wolves as long as the beat doesn't change. This requires a focus to master this technique.

Giant Ice Wolf (Kinchigaru) : Kinchi was Maru's the wolf that taught Maru the launguege of the wolves and helped him master ice manipulation. Kinchigaru was a fine summonning that helped maru find and control the 7th bijuu. The bijuu of wolves..

Abilities: Ice, water, wind manipulation, other unknown
Jutsu's : Tag team with what ever the summoner does.


Maru's life changed ever since he killed his first victim. When Maru was a young child he would sneak out of his room and spy on the older ninja's training. He was fascinated how there swordsmenship and jutsu training can bring out so much power, so everyday he would skip his normal school classes and tried copying the hand signs , techniques , and meditations from the eliet jounin. Wasn't long before that he unlocked his true potential at a young age. When he was old enough to go to the academy he ecelled the other students and moved to genin 3 weeks later. That is where his life changed drastically. The Genin exams was Maru's time to shine and prove that he is the strongest nin out there. His 1st battle was his last in that village...When fighting the other genin Maru was disqualified because he used a jounin jutsu and massacerd the genin before him. Maru was classified and tried as a class-C murderer cause he continued to fight when they disqualified him as soon as they saw the jutsu's handsigns.

Maru went to his house running away from the jounin as his parents secretly turned him in. Maru being bestrayed and feeling anger he let loose an onslaught killing his parents and the surrounding jounin. He ran away to a distint country that was in war with rouges. Maru thought he'd be safe there that in the comotion of war they would never intrude. Maru, badly ingured, nearly made it to the gates when he collapsed and was taken as a prisoner of war by the rouges. Maru spent 10 years in a dark cell , getting tortured and training himself slowly.Maru was just so young when he was captured so his eyes adapted to the darkness ad before that his smell and haering was enhnced.Maru also spent endless nights crying in the visions of his dead parents and torture he went through. Maru wanted revenge , he wanted freedom, he needed blood in his hands. This hate froze up his tears and Maru gained a plan on escapeing with his new found element.

As soon as the gaurd left he used his ice manipulation to pick the lock on his chains as he began training himself the art of weapon combat, scilentness and Ice, water, wind manipulation. Maru endured torture making him stronger , and he trined himself endlessly and then....the day came..The gaurds came to do there daily torure to Maru but this time maru had the edge.The gaurds came into the room and saw maru chained up as normal. The gaurds saw maru look up smileing and they new... As they looked into his cold blooded eyes and saw there own damnation they knew they were goners. Maru froze up the chains and used them are frozen swords as he eradicated the gaurds before him, jetting out the room knocking out all the lights creating eternal darkness as his edge against the nins...Since that day Maru was unstopable and has been kage before but a dictator . Maru became a ruthless killer and will kill anyone not just for the money but for enjoy ment he burned his own village to the ground for there weakness. He is a nice guy at heart but when it comes to killing he will never say no.

Extra Information

Family Members: None

Team mates: None

Sensei: none



Water will:
Type: Conversion
Element: Water, Ice , Mist
Rank: C
Distance: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Description: The user converts his own chakra into water basically. The Liquid is held within the user mouth and can spray as it was a mist or straight forward as a liquid. The user then has the option to let it stay as liquid or with an additional hand sign change the water into deadly ice shards.

Name: Water Prison Technique
Type: Supplementary, Short range (0-5m)
Element: Water
Rank: C-Rank
Description: This jutsu is used to trap a victim inside a virtually inescapable sphere of water. The only downside to this technique is that the user must keep at least one arm inside the sphere at all times in order for the victim to remain imprisoned. Clones can be used in place of the actual person, provided that the clone is the one that performed the technique. This jutsu can't be performed without a sufficiently large body of water to supply the water for it. Despite the fact that the prison is made up entirely out of water, and the target is unable to move while within it, the target is still able to speak.

Name: Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
Type:Offensive, All range
Rank: B-Rank
Element: Water
Description: Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique is a giant, powerful dragon created out of water. This jutsu needs 42 hand seals, the most amounts of hand seals necessary to use a jutsu shown in the series. Another drawback to the technique is that it requires the user to be near a large body of water to complete the technique. However, Maru Momochi was able to produce one without a preexisting water source and with only one hand seal, which was a testament to his skill and one of the reasons why he was selected as Hokage.

Name: Water Release: Great Waterfall Technique
Type:Offensive, Mid to long range (5m+)
Element: Water
Description: Water Release: Great Waterfall Technique is a technique that forms a strong column of water to attack an opponent. Due to the force of the water, the target will be fully enveloped and at the mercy of the current as they are pulled away.

Name: Water Clone Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C-Rank
Element: Water
Description: The Water Clone Technique is similar to the Shadow Clone Technique except it creates clones out of water. Like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it can not travel very far from the original body. Additionally, water clones only have one-tenth of the original person's power. Like other clone techniques, if the water clones are injured enough they will revert back to normal water


Name: Beast Wave Violent Wind Claw
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive, Short to mid-range (0-10m)
Description: This justu uses chakra to infused with and condense a mass amount of wind to form a massive demonic-like claw extending from the user’s dominant hand to strike and grab a target, as well as deflect any weapon or attack. In addition to making it a deadly short to mid-range weapon, the extending claw also carries tremendous force that can devastate anything in its path without affecting the user, making it useful for dislodging solid and heavy object

Name: Wind Release: Rotating blades style
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive, Short to mid-range (0-10m)
Description: This jutsu will infuse wind-based chakra into bladed weapons. The user can than manipulate the blades in a spinning manner to attack the target.


Ice Release: Black Dragon Blizzard
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive, Long range (10m+)
Description: An Ice Release technique formed from freezing water particles in the air . After forming the needed hand seal Demise will thrust her arm to send out a black ether-like dragon to strike her opponent. As it flies through the air it will begin to turn. When it hits the target it will use its motion to launch the opponent high into the air.

Name: Ice Release: Piercing Dragon Fierce Tiger
Type: Offensive, Long range (10m+)
This jutsu allows the user to create a giant tiger made out of ice from freezing water particles in the air. This jutsu is cold enough to freeze any Water Release techniques it comes into contact with.

Name: Ice Release: Snow Storm Swallows
Rank: B-rank
Type:Offensive, Short to mid range (0-10m)
Description: This jutsu creates a cluster of ice needles in the shape of miniature swallows, which the user then throw at the opponent. These needles can change direction in midair and will maim the opponent with their sharp wings.

Name: Ice Release: Twin Dragon Blizzard
Rank: A-rank
Type:Offensive, Long range (10m+)
Description: An advanced version of Ice Release: Black Dragon Blizzard in which Demise releases two dragons of black snow that merge into a massive tornado.

Flying shards technique:
Element:Ice + wind
Type: 0~5m( mid range)
Description: Maru users the water in the air particles and the ones in the ground as well to form multiple shards around him. The shards begin to levitate in the air and shoot at high speeds at the same time. This may seem like a deadly justu but can be blocked fairly easy since the ice is breakable.

Ice Amor::
Rank: A-rank
Element: Ice
Type: Reinforcement
Description: This justu makes the Ice fuse with the skin, if grasping onto ice or touching Ice, allowing the Maru to develope ice an ice lade and a shiled on either arm he chooses, as well as haveing the ice onto his legs , allowing the user to use close combat to his advantage and if on an icey plain his spead increases as well.

Name: Thousand Flying Water Needles of Death
Type: B-rank, Offensive, Short to mid-range (0-10m)
Element: Water and Ice
Description: Using this jutsu, Maru gathers some water from the air and surrounding environment into one thousand long needles. He then directs them to a specific target at high speed, leaping backwards before impact so he doesn't get caught in the crossfire. While the needles do surround a target from all sides, they don't appear above the target, creating an escape route. Maru is able to perform this jutsu with one-handed seals, allowing him to pin an opponent's arm and attack while they cannot use any techniques themselves.

Name: Hidden Mist Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D-Rank
Element: Mist
Description: This jutsu envelops the surrounding area in a dense mist, reducing visibility within the affected area. The density can be controlled by the user, allowing them to create a mist so thick that even they can't see through it.

Sword techs:

Alpha sword tech
Rank: C, A,S, Master
Type: Weapon mastery
Description: Sword combo results may vary on rank
C rank attack : Swords glow and does a 12 point slash attack leaving cutting the opponent in vital spots.
A rank attack : 24 slash attack on vital spots
S rank : 68 slash vital
Master : A seal that the swords to be controlled by there own will to deliever 100 repeated strike on vital spots

Name: Silent Homicide Technique
Type: General skill
As the name suggests, this technique is simply a very quiet method of killing an opponent, usually from behind with a blade. Additionally, because the user is very silent, it cannot be defended against. The user will often slit their opponent's throat, preventing any cry that might give them away. Zabuza was a master of this technique, and was even good enough to track and kill opponents through sound alone

Seal techniques:

Curse Release- Clone technique
Rank: C-rank
Type: Unknown
Description: The justu creates a clone that can be used with any seal. Normal clones would poof when dealed with a seal but this clone is very human like.

Curse Release - Life manipulation art.
Rank: A-rank
Type: Supplemantary
Description: This seal can give curse made clones. This gives clones life basically allowing them to bleed and feel pain.

Name: Five Pronged Seal
Rank: A-rank
Type: Supplementary, Short range (0-5m)[1]
Description: This jutsu produces a powerful seal that is used to block or disturb the flow of chakra in a target. Once the seal is completed, the target will become weaker and unable to fight for a short time. This is because an odd-numbered seal creates an imbalance when placed on top of an even-numbered seal.

Name: Five Pronged Seal Release
Rank: A-rank
Type: Supplementary, Short range (0-5m)
Description: This jutsu is used to remove seals of up to equal power, like the Five Pronged Seal.

Name: Summoning: Impure World Resurrection
Rank: S-rank
Type: Kinjutsu, Supplementary
Summoning: Impure World Resurrection is a forbidden technique used to revive the dead. The ninja will first sacrifice a living person to provide the vessel that the dead soul will inhabit. The dead body will then be encased in ash and dirt to resemble the original body of the person that was resurrected. When the ninja wishes to recall the souls, a portal will open in the ground and the caskets holding the bodies will appear. When the caskets open the bodies will be gray and in a state of minor decay, requiring a special seal to restore their appearance. At this point, the revived person remembers their former lives, and thus is not under the user's control. The same seal used to restore their appearance also wipes the soul of its free will, putting them under the user's control. This technique can also be used to summon multiple people at once, depending on the amount of sacrifices and the chakra level of the user.

Name: Universal Assimilation Jutsu
Rank: Unknown rank
Type: Modification.
Description: Using this jutsu, the user can merge with another object and take on its properties to avoid any damage.

Name: Blocking Technique Absorption Seal
Rank: No-rank
Type: Defensive, Short range (0-5m)
A highly advanced sealing technique that is capable of absorbing any chakra, regardless of any special or nature transformation, and dispersing it within one's body by spinning the chakra within one's body in the opposite direction. As a result, this technique can absorb any ninjutsu technique, regardless of power, without harming the user. The User can only hold One technique at a time and can use it against the enemy. (Power of the jutsu is based on how much chakra the user uses to activate the seal. The user cannot keep the technique very long because it doesn't coincide with the users element. Thus the proper definition to this tech will be absorb , supply technique with chakra and redirect the attack more powerfully)


::Ice grave:::

Equipment: Conductible wire and senbon needles

Weapons: One katana(One on his back) and Ice scythe hidden in the mist. (must be summoned by sacrificeing all 5 hounds)

Enhanced Arm gauntlets and greaves
Description: The rare metal made with my seals make the metal unbreakable and can absorb the Ice and wind elements from the chakra my body gives off. Thus giving then wind and Freeze Ice properties.

Ice scythe hidden in the mist: A sycthe made out of the chakra and element of Maru's wolves. This weapon leaks out a heavy mist makeing it the best hidden sly weapon.

Outfit: Gray hair with red highlights , a battle yet comfortable shirt , standard pants and etc

Strengths:Sly, Ice manipulation , weapon mastery

Weakness's: Cocky , pushes himself to the limit when angry,

Abilities: Ice manipulation and seal Mastery

Bloodline: Eyes of shadows (allows him to threw the unseeable examples : Fog , mist and shadow)

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PostSubject: Re: New and improved maru   Tue Aug 04, 2009 3:09 pm

Well I can't find anything wrong with this. Approve unless told other wise.
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