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PostSubject: Ryuku   Sat May 21, 2011 9:38 pm

Shurajou, Ryuku




The last name is a tribute to my old clan...


General Information

Name: Ryuku Shurajou
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Height: 5'5
Weight: 110 lbs
DOB: 9/18
Appearance: Ryuku is a tall slender boy with an athletic figure but low muscle definition. His hair is kept very short with spikes coming up, and is a radiant white color with a tint of light blue. His eyes are Grey, his skin is a light tan. His attire consists of light brown basic ninja sandals with two straps, dark blue basic ninja pants outfitted with one pocket on the right for him to hold ninja tools, a pouch on his belt, a tight fit white T-shirt along with a long sleeve white jacket that extends 3 inches below his waist with one pocket on the each sleeve of the armor and a mask covering his mouth. Lastly, Ryuku wears a red scarf that he never takes off given to him by his elder brother who is an ANBU black ops.

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During jobs/errands Ryuku wears a black hood covering his entire face and a cape which can be used as a robe when extended all the way. When in combat Ryu usually removes his jacket to be able to move around quicker.

Personality: Ryu is a soft spoken young boy, and has always been independent. His manners are poor with new people and as such he doesn't base his respect on authority, family or rank. He is cold at times to people that he is fond of but also has a protectiveness that he doesn't show. Though he prefers to do things independently he has good teamwork skills, always putting the well being of his team before himself and playing to their skills and abilities before himself. He is a born leader, though he doesn't quite welcome his calling. Ryuku has a great deal of patience as well. Calm, and daring. The lone wolf as most people will describe. In times of peace Ryu is usually roaming the lands unnoticed, but when danger is near, he has a knack for being in the right place at the right time.

Likes:
Humor
Running
Succeeding

Dislikes:
Bugs
Needles
Failing

Character Information

Rank: Genin
Country: Wanderer

Combat Strengths:
-Great Speed
-Very Good Reflexes
-Very Good Photographic Memory[Images, Data, Faces]

Combat Weaknesses:
-Bad Genjutsu Resistance
-Below Average Eyesight[Near Sighted]
-Poor Ability to Fight in Cold temperature(Below 25°F)[Bad]

Equipment:

Lower Right Pocket: [5 Kunai]
Pouch: [12 Shuriken]
Right Sleeve Pocket: [1 Food Pill]
Left Sleeve Pocket: [3 Ointment]
Upper Chest Pocket :[10 Explosive Notes]

Weapon: A 3 foot long sword is Ryu's favored weapon. It has a soft black handle, along with a moderately sharp tip at the end of the blade. He carries the sword on his back, covering it with a black sheath.
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Element(s): Fire

Jutsu:

E-Rank
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Other Information

Fighting Style: Ryuku was trained to stay calm during combat, and think before acting instead of rushing right in. His focal point during combat is to put up a consistent defense while looking for holes in the enemy defense while at the same time not showing what he can really do. Once Ryu finds a hole in the enemy defense he exploits it and goes on the offensive fully utilizing his jutsu and all his skills as well. His strong point during combat is great speed, which he has always worked hard at due to his lack of strength.

Relationships: None .-.
Family: Older Brother

Background

Pre Academy:
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku   Sun May 22, 2011 7:00 am

You have no country; that makes you a rogue. You're in a desert in your bio, though. That implies that you were in Sand Country. D; You should mention that fact somewhere in your bio. And since your a wanderer now, you should mention that at the end of your bio too. I know that it kinda ruins your effective conclusion, but... yeah. :G It makes it easier to understand.

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Weight: 110

No unit! D; I know it's in pounds, but still. xD It's good to be a perfectionist~

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Jutsu:

... Do you have none? o-o That's kinda impossible, since I (as the kage of Sand) wouldn't allow any of my students to rank up to genin without learning the basic academy techniques. It could be a careless mistake on your part, so this is just a heads up. :3

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as of all members of the Kemuri clan at birth. His skin is a light tan and he has a tattoo of the Rikuhi symbol along with a tattoo of the number 0 alongside it, representing the chance people said he had of becoming a great shinobi.

You don't mention 'Kemuri' or 'Rikuhi' anywhere in your profile. o_o Nor have you made a Clan Registration for any custom clan you might have in mind. Finally, the fact that your ninja prowess was doubted by the villagers was not mentioned in your bio. :3 Just tiny flaws here and there~

Apart from the aforementioned flaws, your profile is fanciful. I like the addition you made in 'Other Information' - no one else thought of including a 'Fighting Style' in their profile. Also, your English is impressive, and your descriptions are easy to understand.

... I find it amusing that I'm modding a profile of yours. xD You were the one checking Yakate in Shine HQ~

Anyway, deal with the above mentioned issues and you should be good to go. :3
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku   Mon May 23, 2011 11:04 pm

Yeah, quite the change of scenery. Your a much better RP mod than I ever was though, I was always too lazy to look at specific details...xD

In any case, the clan and village mentionings are there because this is really just an edited version of an old RP char on another site.

Fixed now.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku   Tue May 24, 2011 8:21 am

;D Approved! Have fun RPing~<3
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