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PostSubject: Village Entrance   Sat Apr 23, 2011 9:19 pm

After entering from the marshes and swamps of the country you will shortly enter the village entrance where guard's stand watching over the village and granting entrance to those who are not sand shinobi's. All Swamp shinobi's and visitors are required to enter thorough this area or will be consider a missing ninja, and a intruder in our village.
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Tue Apr 26, 2011 9:11 pm

The meeting was quite interesting; how many people get to battle a Bijuu and use it? Just how strong is the Kage of the village? And why does Yahiko's force require such a powerful beast? Numerous questions processed in the mind of the young Uchiha. This right here was the real deal. Raijin was going to experience war for the very first time of his life. I wonder what Bijuu we'll be going up against, heh. If only Yajusame was here; no doubt about it we'd be tearing right through the enemy.

Raijin walked down the street. Rain clouds were drawing near. Was there a storm approaching? If there was, traveling would be much more difficult. These lands can easily get flooded during heavy rainfall. With all these men carrying equipment and walking through the flooded Swamps the Alligators will surely dine well tonight. He finally reached the entrance to the village, which was currently the meeting point. "They better not take long...." Raijin leaned beside the gate wall, waiting for Shimo and Yahiko to arrive.
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Wed Apr 27, 2011 6:24 pm

The meeting was successful and now a new goal is at hand. Yahiko and his men were ready for battle and were off to the village gate " now all the peices are in play men our hopes and dreams will come true as long as we stick to the plan" his men cheered for their leader and he smirked "Now We Are Off!!!!" they all disppeared in a puff of smoke to the front gate where they confronted the uchiha "Well hello my young friend re you all set for a trip to the devil's den" he grinned at his new comrade
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Wed Apr 27, 2011 7:47 pm

Shimo walked past the gate and up to her fellow rebels. "Why hello Raijin, Yahiko. Sorry I'm late...I had to collect a few things." She said simply, as per there last meeting she had on all three of her weapons on her person. Samehada, Ekitai raitoningu, and Kuro hai all sat quietly on her back. Along with that she had also acquired a new black cloak she had on.
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Wed Apr 27, 2011 10:31 pm

Raijin glanced at the large group of men standing behind their Senju leader. All of them carried a look of determination, despite the fact that they were going up against one of the nine tailed beast. "I rushed here so I didn't prepare well. Although, I did manage to get my hands on these dango." He slid his hand into the black cloak and pulled out one of his favorite meals. Once everyone caught a glimpse of the small box filled with these delicious treats he slid it back into the cloak. "Alright Senju, you and your men know these lands more than I do; You can lead the way." As much as he hated this man, he admired his courage and had know problem with him leading the group. He stepped away from the wall and walked over to Shimo, taking her side. "Don't you think you'd be slowed down by all of those weapons you're carrying?"
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Thu Apr 28, 2011 5:06 pm

Coming from a very informational lunch and tour of the hidden swamp with the fascinating Kaguya girl, Ryo's head was spinning, trying to keep everything he had learned and saw straight. There was so much he had to work into an informative, detailed, report for when he returned to his village. As he approached the big gates that stand at the front of the village, his eye caught sight of a very...interesting sight. Maybe his journey wasn't over yet... He recognized the girl with light blue skin as a traveler he had heard of...a great swords women to be respected. The other two important looking figures, he didn't recognize from descriptions, but knew them to be important just from their company of the swords women and the mass of armed men around them.

He took a few steps toward the group, taking a risk, but as he looked nothing like a swamp nin or had anything to identify him with any village or association, with the exception of the old Hidden Mist symbol on his sword belt, he didn't have fear of them attacking him. "Time to see what this is all about." he thought to himself.

He addressed the group of three that seemed the most important,
'Excuse me, I don't mean to interrupt but do any of you know how to get out of the swamps?"

It was a simple way for him to insert himself into their conversation, but it should work.
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Fri Apr 29, 2011 1:46 pm

He looked at the young ninja and saw he was from the mist "you want to leave the swamps you say? well follow us we are going on a long journey anyway" he looked at raijin, shimo, and his men " okay we leave now and we will come back with a new power to save this village" they all disappeared towards their goal with a brand new ninja by their side. What awaits these ninja on the journey to the bijuu
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Mon May 02, 2011 9:31 pm

Shimo looked over at Raijin, "The weight of there weapons are nothing, they are nothing compared to the true weight I'm wearing." She said, unknown to both Raijin and Yahiko, she was wearing over 400 pounds worth of weights on each of her legs. "So are we ready to head out?" She asked with a smirk.
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Mon May 02, 2011 9:44 pm

OOC: lol Tsumi, wrong topic.
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Wed May 04, 2011 4:21 pm

Gosuto was just twenty-six meters from the village gates. For now he'd stay hidden behind a large thick tree, watching the pathetic guards mingle with the local sluts. A shame it was that Sunagakure was at war with a village like this; and the fact that they didn't defeat them by now made it worse. "Where is Saku, I don't see him anywhere....I should try and sense him." Taking precaution, Gosuto gradually started fading a. The index of refraction was now that of air, meaning that he was now invisible. He also suppressed his chakra temporarily. I shall wait for Saku and Lord Yakate before I make any moves.."
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Wed May 04, 2011 5:33 pm

Speeding though the foliage and trees Kurin touched down in front of the huge gates of his village. The 4 men on guard instantly snapped to attention at his presence, and his two companions landing moments later behind him. He surveyed the scene, his calm expression looking at every tree and shrub in front of the village. He should have been satisfied by not seeing anything there....but it made him more unsettled. He could not detect the strange chakra that had disappeard and worse he did not see a body. Someone was hiding and they were damn good at it. But he had a surprise for anyone or anything that was lurking out there.

He walked toward the guards calling out to them.
"Seal the gates...a flood is coming."

Their eyes shot open and darted a round for a second, not understanding what Kurin knew that they did not. But they obeyed and shut the gates as Kurin motioned for his companions to follow him as he jumped up and pushed off the village wall once to reach the top of it. There he stood looking down at the trees before the village gate, his companions coming up next to him. He then raised his right arm high into the air, alerting those behind him. Three small bone points slide from his left palm, hidden to anyone as a precaution. The he dropped his arm as a signal to those behind him to begin.

Along the wall, big sections of the lower half of the wall slide up, revealing big, sewer drain looking pipes pointed away from the village. A rumbling could be heard and then tons of gushing greenish swamp water was shot from these pipes. The filtration of this water was from the surrounding swamp and was a means of defense for the village when faced with many ground based enemies, big foes, or simply pushing things away from the village. In this case, the flood waters were used to flush anything hiding in the area out. It would only last a minute at most, until they pushed the valve to shut of the water from within the village, but the waters were shot out, high enough to reach the top branches of the trees before the village. The waters would recede back to the ground in moments as it returned to the swamp, but the task would be complete by then. He waited for movement atop the large wall.


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Defensive Flood will be drained away and the landscape will return to normal in 3 posts after this.
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Wed May 04, 2011 6:09 pm

Saku was on his way to the village entrance, even do he was confident, it was anonymous what was further on. He would walk slowly, showing no emotion what so ever. The road was long to get at this point, and he was not stoping now. Two large doors could be seen seven meters away, it put a smile on Saku's face. ''Finally i wated for this moment....'' Saku said with exitment. Suddentlly two big pipes began to blast water, the water was large like a tsunami, strong enough to take Saku body with it or even trees! ''What!?'' Saku had no time to waste. The water was coming closer and it was large. ''Time to fly!'' He began doing a string of handseals, the pot on his back realised sand. This sand began to form a cload under Saku, The cload began to float into the air. ''That was close...'' Said Saku as the water almost took him. He soon look at the gates of the village entrance. A man could be seen in the distance, his arm was raised up. Saku had nothing to say, but he did have something to do!

The cload floated higher and from 6 meters away he aimed at this man. ''Okay take this.'' Saku did quik handseals and placed his palms together, He then luanched a wind blast at Kurin. The blast was going to attempt to sweep Kurin off his feet.



Wind Bullet
Rank: D
Range: Close (0m~5m), Mid (5m~ 10m)
Type:Attack
The ninja will do handseals, creating a bullet of wind that will attempt to hit there target.


Desert Sand Floating
Rank: C
Range: 0m~100m-
Type: Supplementary
Sabaku Fuyuu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Sand ninja.Using his ability to levitate sand, Saku will bring together sand into cloud shape clumps. These clumps are dense enough for Saku or another ninja to rest on. This can allow Saku to rise above any threat from below.




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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Wed May 04, 2011 11:47 pm

OOC: Saku, you did not mention in your post how you came to the Entrance. Nor did you mention when you used the Desert Sand Floating Technique. Although it's logical for you to be able to attack Kurin with your technique while floating on sand to avoid the flood, you should add more detail. Why?

Were you sneaky when you came there, or did you just run like hell? And which angle are you attacking from - straight ahead, or slyly from a corner? Without such details, not only does your attack lose effectiveness, but Kurin can choose his own way of avoiding your attack; and counter-attacking as well. It is to your advantage that I'm saying this. D; So don't hate me.

A supreme flaw, however, is your mentioning of Gosuto. The area was flooded, and then you showed up; you don't really know whether he was hit by the flood and killed, or if he lost his disguise and jumped upwards somewhere.

It would make sense if Gosuto posted first and then you did, or if you edited your post to make it better; if the members of this topic feel it possible to post after such a vague post, though, they are free to reply.
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Thu May 05, 2011 12:37 pm

Madam Red had been standing close to Kurin, a simple disguise jutsu thrown over her, to hide her true nature yet from the other Swamp Villagers and shinobi. Considering that her name was quite disliked and that the Swamp village was wary of eventual visitors as the chuunin who had been there with them earlier, had pointed out. So, she had taken his face and attitude and lowered her chakra presence so that she wouldn't bring any suspicions.
It had been quite a disappointing experience though - the panic of the future war had shaken the villagers too much, making them forget about eventual dangers and spies. None of them noticed how un-charastically nice the chuunin was acting, as well as level headed. Oh, she had seen that he was a rather easily heated up fellow and that he was certainly not someone polite who knew how to calculate his own words.

But apparently, just looking like him had been sufficient to fool everyone, or at least so it seemed. Madam Red just smirked at it and kept on following the one she swore loyalty to: Kurin Kaguya.

Once on the walls of the village, she saw how large and wide the Swamp Country was. She sighed in relief at the thought that they'd be fighting on a firm ground. If she had to fight in there, she would have gotten more troubles to work and to make her jutsu effective. After all, she needed him to see her and that was the main weakness in her fighting patterns. Not that it really mattered, since she always won.

The flood created upon the order of Kurin was, so to say, impressive. The whole ground was drowned in murky water, trees rooted out of the ground, small lakes submerged by the great flood, birds flying fleeing, alligators appearing and rocks moving violently with it. She had never seen something similar and a shiver ran down her spine. This was thus how dangerous nature could be; a flood would probably be even more violent and dangerous if human hands weren't creating it she guessed. It would be like a real apocalypse.

Suddenly, she sensed a powerful chakra and saw a figure appear, floating on sand. The man had red hair, darker than hers and black circles around his eyes. A sand user - Bloody Angelina was shocked so to say. Who knew that the ex-kage of Sand would appear here to fight her and Kurin.
A wind bullet blew at the Kaguya right at that moment.

Correction, the new comer hadn't seen her or simply wasn't interested in her. Well, from what she knew, the man wasn't that into genjutsu and actually quite weak against it. So, she took her chance, supposing that Kurin could dodge the simple attack. Her hands formed a few seals and a wave of chakra hit the ex-kage, making him remember fear and blood, stimulating painful memories of his past, slowly creating a certain paranoia while blood will appear on his body, clothes and sand.
If he didn't manage to dispel it or find the source, he'd be disoriented for a while, weak and unguarded for an attack. That was the goal Madam Red was aiming for...

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Name: Bloody Paranoia
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Range: 0-15 meters
Description: The user, Madam Red in this case, creates a few hand signs in the dark. A chakra wave will stimulate the nerves of the opponent, first creating a shiver down it's spine and a cold feeling in it's body. The chakra wave will then hit the opponents memories of blood and fear, creating a paranoia and visions of the whole place he/she is in, is covered in blood, his/her body covered with it too.



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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Sun May 08, 2011 4:03 pm

Just when he thought things were going quite swell a white haired man appeared, pale in skin complexion and very dull, at least to Gosuto. By his side was a young male dressed in Chuunin clothes. The older one, Gosuto knew exactly who he was. He waited there watching the two, patiently waiting for the right moment to strike. But things weren't going to be that easy for Gosuto, the man had ordered for a flood to sweep the area. Water violently crashed into tree trunks, snapping them with incredible force. Gosuto jumped into the air, avoiding the temporary waves.

When the force of gravity pulled Gosuto down, he landed on the branch of a tree that happened to survive the flood. At that same time Saku had made his appearance at the site, choosing to attack Kurin with Fuuton techniques. Something didn't feel right...There was a slight disturbance and Gosuto caught onto it. A Genjutsu had been placed on Saku.

"It seems that I must battle you two..." Gosuto faded into view, his shoulder rested against the tree and arms folded. "The Dead Man, this is too good to be true. I can finally enjoy a battle again!" He chuckled and looked at the alligators below. The battle would begin now...He quickly drew a shuriken and threw it at the Chuunin's head. First he wanted to test his speed.


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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Sun May 08, 2011 7:10 pm

OOC: o____o Madam Red is disguised and not many people do know her. She is having a chuunin's disguise with a simple AS jutsu while repressing her chakra, making it quite difficult to know who she is. THUS, edit your post. Cuz except if you know she is disguised, you can't know it's Madam Red.
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Mon May 09, 2011 11:11 am

As the flood waters covered the area, he saw what he was after. Slight movement, almost like a mirror of the environment or a shimmer, leap from the ground above the trees to avoid the waters and land on a branch of a tall tree that had survived. He didn't even let the shimmering form to hit the tree before he quickly arced his hand at it, releasing three bone, stakes he had protruding from his arm, almost like bone kunai, at least just as dense if not denser then kunai at it, before it could react or touch down.

A whistling caught his attention, and he looked up to see a sand user floating in the air on a sand cloud, and a blast of air coming at him at a high seed. He glared, his first sign of emotion upon recognizing the man on the sand cloud. He dared show his face here?! The ex-kage of the Sand, Saku Natia, the self proclaimed Sand God. Kurin recognized the attack coming his way, a low level wind bullet. Time to send a message to this false god.

He swung his right hand across his body, as if back handing something in front of hi, in the direction of the incoming attack. A sightly more powerful gust of wind was produced without the need of hand signs at the wind bullet. The two jutsu's collided in the air, in an eruption of wind blowing every ones hair back.

He held his glare at the man above, taking note that Madam Red had not only changed form to look like the chunin, but had sent her own wave of chakra out. He felt it being so close to her but doubted others would. He stared bullets through Saku, his hate for those from the sand very great, and this man, once proclaimed their leader... He yelled at Saku

"You claim yourself a God. I have always wanted to put that to the test. Tell me Saku, can Gods bleed?"

Kurin would not let this man walk away from this battle. He would do what he could to put an end to his life. To call himself a god...it was laughable. Just like the Sand to over boast about their abilities. Unlike the Swamp who let their power make their name for them. No false ideals, juts hard fact and raw power forging their name. Kurin would make this known to Saku. The shimmering image was a back thought now that he had identified the ex Sand Kage. He would be Kurin's main focus here.

The water was beginning to lower and had stopped being forced form the walls, and in fact the pipes were once again blocked from view having been covered again after the waters had ceased. They were would now be up to a man's shoulders, and with crocodiles and debris floating in the waters, still quite deadly.

Kurin, keeping his eyes on Saku, formed a quick set of hand signs at a blinding speed that only one with a sharigan could hope to see, he then pulled the winds around his right arm, channeling his wind nature. Saku was above the ground and out of his reach. If he wanted to be fully effective it would be ideal to knock him fro his high elevation. He pointed this right arm out to his side as the winds took on such a force that you could no longer see the arm through the spiraling winds. He then thrusted the arm in Saku's direction. A spiraling lance of white wind shot from his arm, still attached to him, in Saku's direction at very high speeds, with deadly drilling potential. He was aiming at Saku, but at his knees, which from Saku's view would be impossible to tell since it was simply being fired up at him.

Kurin wanted to hit Saku's sand could in the best case scenario. The lance was moving fast enough that his range of motion would be limited for evasion, moving up would mean no direct hit to Saku's person, but a direct hit to the sand, moving down would mean a devastating hit to Saku's body or head, either side would clip a knee or leg. Unless he had a niffty very powerful defense he could whip up in the air, in less then 2 seconds, one of those would become a fact. Planning for one of these outcomes, Kurin began thinking out his next move...


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Name: Wind Gust
Rank: C
Range: 20 yds
Element: Fuuton
Description: This is a simple jutsu that allows the user to manipulate the air around him/her using the Fuuton element. The user moves one hand or leg and a blast of air chakra follows. This can be used to attack, to extinguish fire of low levels, or even to blast oneself into the air.(Note the Higher the level of the user, the higher the flame that can be put out with this. Nothing over A rank may be extinguished with this technique.) This can only put out fires within it's range. The gust is enough to knock a grown man who is unsupported to the ground, a child to the ground and paused a few feet back and so forth. Not damaging.

Name: Gods Lance
Rank: B
Range: 50 ft
Type: Ninjutsu
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Description: Forming a set of hand signs wind is pulled around one of the users arms. They then throw that arm at a target creating a large current of wind to completely cover the arm. The result is a lance of wind as thick as the persons arm, now completely white wind, spirals, drilling into what ever the user points their fingers at. It will extend for 50 ft. It is made of powerful wind and will extinguish any B rank or lower flame.
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Tue May 10, 2011 4:58 pm

Saku had luanched a wind blast at Kurin, attempting to hit him. But Saku notice something suspicus about the chunnin beside Kurin. She began to do some hand seals, and before he knew it Saku began to see bloody events. ''What is this...'' Saku was now in a genjutsu. But Saku willpower was far much greater than a technique that was so easy to detect. He dispelled the genjutsu quikly, and managed to see Kurin flinging his arm towards Saku. ''You think such an easy attack is going to finish me, your funny.'' Saku simply commanded the sand to cover his whole front side, also beneath him. Exposing Saku's behind, so he formed a handseal and sommened forth a clone for safety of his behind.

Sand Clone Technique
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Suna Bunshin is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Sand ninja. The clone functions like a normal Bunshin, except it is made out of sand. The clone itself can be formed out of the Suna no Tate that protects Sand. When a ninja goes to attack the Bunshin, the malleability of the sand allows the blow to sink into the sand, which can then wrap itself around the limb to constrain the attacker.
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Wed May 11, 2011 4:09 am

[OOC: Saku, I'mma go accept that a Kage level person can dispell a C-ranked genjutsu by sheer willpower. But remember you don't have Kai, the dispelling jutsu. And thus whenever I go higher, you will fall because of it without an exception. Also, again, Madam Red is disguised as Shinji, who's a male chuunin xD
As for Madam Red's technique and effect, if you read the description correctly, Saku was supposed to feel some chills and discomfort first. A person, Kage or not, needs a few seconds to get over it and to dispel it. Also, you only remember things - you don't see them in front of you. The only visible part of the genjutsu is the blood that covers you suddenly. The rest is all memories and triggering bad feelings inside the victim's mind.
I'mma let it pass like I said, but I'd like you still to remember about it.
Lastly, are you really only going to make a clone to protect yourself? Aren't you going to counter attack? You are more or less open right now except for your sand barriers (did they disappear or are they permanent?) and your sand clone (I wonder why you'd make one when you know the only person more or less behind you is Gosuto, who's your ally) and thus Kurin and Madam Red could attack you.

And I repeat for everyone that in battle one post is only a few seconds - thus, normally only one defense move and chain reaction attack can be done. Preferably if you want to do a chain reaction in attacks, you'd do one attack (and wait for the other to say if it worked) and prepare your next attack by mentioning your hand seals.
That way, we avoid discussions about OPed attacks, auto-hit and what not else.

As for replying, I'm first going to wait for Gosuto to edit his post as I said in my previous OOC post. I also remind him that he should maybe try an attack in his previous post against Madam Red otherwise she could keep on attacking Saku right now without having to worry about anything.
Remember that Kurin and her are on the village's walls.]
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Wed May 11, 2011 4:52 pm

OOC: Thank you, and the only reason i did'nt attack was cuase i have something planned.
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Thu May 12, 2011 6:33 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Fri May 13, 2011 5:09 pm

[OOC: Thank you everyone~]

Madam Red was mildly impressed by the sand tactics of the sand user. But really, she was bored already. Kurin used some nice tactics and actually showed some spirit in the battle, not underestimating his opponent (yet), which she liked of him.
Saku was too defensive for an attacker and knowing about his reputation, she knew he was about to do something if she didn't stop him first.

Softly, she started humming a song, that was very similar to "London Bridge is falling down" while she took one of her special scalpels out of her pocket. In the corner of the eye, she saw another sand ninja appear, having survived the flood. Her disguised ruby eyes flashed as well a smirk appeared on her lips, revealing her white teeth.
"See the rain pouring down, pouring down..."

She opened her left wrist and slid the scalpel over it, slowly, precisely, creating a thin, but visible line, from which blood started to drip. She looked at it, intensely, the smirk widening.
The blood, instead of dropping on the ground, started formating thin needles, senbon and floated up in the air, to gather around and above Saku's half formed barrier. He couldn't escape that one, or at least not both.
"Blood is pouring down..."

Suddenly, a flash of red and the senbon made of her blood flashed down on the sand barriers and Saku, too fast for his brain to react immediately, the sharp points of the weapons piercing the walls, his skin and clothes without any exception, showering the clone along.
"My fair Lady~"

The woman mouthed the word "katsu" while she formated some hand seals for her next move. If Kurin could use her momentum created by the violent explosions of her blood and the sharp and stinging pain Saku would feel, she would be able to stop the man and keep him in her own clutches...

Even though the sand walls wouldn't crumble completely, the defense would be shaken and the clone dispersed. And the ex-kage would still have to look up to her. If her first prepared technique wouldn't work she would always be able to use another genjutsu - the man hadn't used kai to free himself from the genjutsu but sheer willpower. Meaning that he hadn't the dispelling jutsu. Which would result in his ultimate defeat if he ever looked at her again...

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Jutsu used:

Name: Bloody Senbon
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu (range 1-20 m)
Element: Blood
Description: Madam Red makes a cut on her wrist. After that she swings her arm letting a some blood fall in the air. After she makes the handsigns the blood transforms into senbons and they aim the enemy with high speed.

Name: Blood Explosion
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu (range 1 m)
Element: None
Description: At the command “Katsu”, Madam Red makes some of her blood explode. The explosion has a range of 1 m. This jutsu is usually used with the thrown blood senbons.

Preparation of this jutsu done:

Name: Body Control
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: If one of Madam Red’s blood senbon hits the target, it enters its body and then it’s blood veins. In the enemy’s blood veins Madam Red uses her blood to block the blood circulation in the targets body until the target faints of pain and lack of oxygen in the brain.

This is OOC information. So, no one can know what is about to happen or anything~
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Sat May 14, 2011 2:37 pm

OOC: Madam, you didn't dodge the Shuriken thrown at your head. Since I'm a friend, instead of hitting your head and instantly killing you, it will hit your shoulder.

The Chuunin, instead of dodging the incoming Shuriken, slit his wrist and manipulated the seeping blood, forming many blood senbon and using them to surround Saku. As a result of doing this, he was hit by the projectile. Fortunately for him, projectile motion had saved him. Gravity had forced the shuriken to drop lower and lodge itself right into her right shoulder, the point of the shuriken hitting the bone; she was now wounded. But there were still senbon to deal with. Even though Saku couldn't see the senbon Gosuto could, "Saku, frightened Armadillo!!!"

Communicating using codes was going to give Saku and Gosuto a huge advantage. Since they were from the same village and Gosuto had served under him, they could use codes from the village. Saku would know exactly what to do. From the corner of his eye, he saw several projectiles closing in on him. Gosuto dropped back, falling off of the branch and watching then pass over. Gosuto landed on the ground and rushed towards the wounded Chuunin, ready to finish him off. "You shall be vaporized where you stand!"


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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Sun May 15, 2011 5:32 am

The hate for the Sand was great in Kurin, as it was in practically all Swamp nin. They were despicable dusty old wash out ninja with no real skill who hide behind their Sand and Jinchuriki. He wanted nothing more then to soak Saku's sand with the blood of the false god and send it back to the Hidden Sand along with his head as a warning for what was to come. He was so coaught up in this moment, as his blood began to boil, taht he nearly missed an incoming projectile.

Apparently the Nin who had tried to be sneaky and remain hidden form him had finally decided to be a man and reveal himself. The gleam of meta caught his eye, and he barley saw it as it approached Madam Red. A rather simple attack that he had overlooked but something that was unforgivable. He quickly flicked his hand in front of her, using his Wind chakra to send a wave of air across her to attempt to throw the kunai off. It worked barley, but it was to close to throw off completely. It seemed to graze her arm and draw blood though rather then fully penetrating (O.O) her.

How dare that sand scum attempt to injure his new ally while trying to stay out of the way like a coward. The fact that blood was drawn drew a small frown off disgust on his face as he cast his gaze down to the approaching ninja.

"Watch the False God will you. I'll remove this filth."


With that he stepped off the wall, using his wind control to land safely, in a crouch on the mushy, wet ground. sending a splash of water all around. The water had receded now only a thin layer was atop the ground. He fixed his gaze on the approaching ninja and rose to his full height. A small bone began to poke, just barely visible from his rib cage, and four small tips began to emerge from his forearms, at both sides as well as on top and underneath. This was a battle he was ready to take. This ninja was about to be in for a surprise.



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Name: Wind Gust
Rank: C
Range: 20 yds
Element: Fuuton
Description: This is a simple jutsu that allows the user to manipulate the air around him/her using the Fuuton element. The user moves one hand or leg and a blast of air chakra follows. This can be used to attack, to extinguish fire of low levels, or even to blast oneself into the air.(Note the Higher the level of the user, the higher the flame that can be put out with this. Nothing over A rank may be extinguished with this technique.) This can only put out fires within it's range. The gust is enough to knock a grown man who is unsupported to the ground, a child to the ground and paused a few feet back and so forth. Not damaging.

Name: Current Control
Rank: B
Range: -
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: Also the user to manipulate the air around them into currents and give them the ability to fly.
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PostSubject: Re: Village Entrance   Sun May 15, 2011 7:07 pm

Saku was looking at the in front of him, while the clone watched the back, the only opening. The clone had everything Saku had, but the pot that Saku wears on his back. This made the clone faster than Saku and very useful. There was silence those few seconds Saku stood in the half bairier. Why had'nt Saku attack? It was becuase he just wanted to see the power of these opponents, and they just were not ready for the ex-kazekage. ''Im not impressed...'' whispered Saku.

Then Saku heard a voice screaming out loud. The words that came out where, "Saku, frightened Armadillo!!!" Saku smiled, finally Gosuto had shown himself. The words that Gosuto said meant one thing, it was a defensive call. Translated meant ''FULL DEFENSE''. Saku wasted no time and without handseals the sand made a full barrier, covering him and his clone entirely. The senbon would hit all over the barrier, but since Saku made the sand thicker the senbon only went in three cm. ''That was another close one, im lucky Gosuto was here. I need to stop being lazy and finally show these swamp ninja what we're made of.''

A few seconds would pass and the poeple from the outside were still wondering what was going on? Boom! The clone blasted out of the caccoon(barrier), diving down to land. Saku had let the part of sand that was covered with senbon fall to ground, but still left a portion of sand under him to float him down. He soon was beside his clone, Saku saw Gosuto and Kurin about to clash and he aslo saw madam red. ''Well time to stop playing around, die..'' Saku soon unleashed a great deal of chakra and sand. The size was enormous, it was a giant tsunami made up from sand. Saku was going to finish this here. The large wave was headed towards the gate (Kurin,Gosuto, and Madam red). ''GOSUTO, DESERT FOX SCURRY!" These codes where going to be a big help.
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Desert Coffin
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Sabaku Kyuu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Sand ninja.The shinobi will cause sand to rise from the ground and wrap around the legs of his target, restraining them in place. The sand will then rise up to full encase the target. This technique alone can crush the bones of his opponent but the technique is usually used to prepare the victim for the Sabaku Sousou technique.




Quicksand Waterfall Current
Rank: Unknown
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Ryuusa Bakuryuu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Sand ninja Saku Natia. The technique functions similar to his Sabaku Kyuu except on a much larger scale. With the development of Saku's powers he has gained further control over the nearby environment. By crushing rocks and pebbles in the ground with his sand, he can create more useable sand. After focusing his power, a large tidal wave size amount sand will rise from the ground to cover his target and the surrounding area. This technique serves to set up his Sabaku Taisou technique.
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