Yahiko Senju

General Information

Name: Senju, Yahiko
Nickname: Gentle Oak of the Swamp (の優しいオークがスワンプ, No Yasashii Oku Ga Suwanpu)
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Height: 6'1ft
Weight: 183lb
DOB: 3.8
Appearance: Yahiko Senju, one of the most handsome shinobi of his village. With a tan colored skin complexion and light brown colored eyes, this young man captures of the eyes of many women. His hair is dark brown and drops down to his upper back region. The bangs are split, a piece of hair hanging over his forehead on each side of his face. Yahiko is very lean and muscular with the toned body that would make many men envious. On his right shoulder he bears the Senju clan symbol.

Yahiko wears an open collared sleeveless shirt that is crimson in color. On the left side of the collar is again the clan symbol. Underneath his main sleeveless shirt he wears a short sleeved gray shirt. The main shirt hangs down to his thigh section and is held against his waist by a pine colored sash. Also tied around his waist is a strong thin string attached to armor plates that hang beneath the shirt. Yahiko wears black pants and leg warmers with the average shinobi sandals. 

Personality: Yahiko is a good man with many morals. He is a great shinobi from his village and believes in protecting the things close to him, for instance his mother, sister, and village. There's nothing better than exploring the Swamps surrounding the village and cherishing the nature. Although he is a strong and well known shinobi, it takes a lot to anger this guy.There are times though, when it does happen, that Yahiko gets angered. When this happens he unleashes such a violent outburst that some may be put in danger. This rarely occurs though. One of his main problems is trying to stop his perverted ways. An example can be when he stalks attractive women in the hot springs and in training grounds.


 
Likes: Nature, his family, exploring, battling strong shinobi, and ramen.

Dislikes: War, evil, corruption, sushi, and Fire.  


Character Information

Rank: Title - Jounin / Level -  S Rank/ will challenge swamp kage for position 
Country: Swamp
Combat Strengths: Beyond normal human strength, high durability, Mokuton - Wood release, Ninjutsu, and Taijutsu.
Combat Weaknesses: Speed, Stamina, Raiton - Lightning release, Genjutsu and agility.

Equipment: 
- 10 Bomb Tags
- 25 Shuriken and Kunai
- 5 Smoke Bombs
- 1 Medical Pouch: Bandages, Antibiotics, Medicine, Medical herbs

Weapon: None

Element(s): Doton - Earth, Suiton - Water and Mokuton - Wood

Jutsu:Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Kai - Release
Rank: D
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Daibakufu no Jutsu - Grand Waterfall Technique
Rank: A
Range: Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Daibakufu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.

Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Anime Only
Suiton • Daibakuryuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below. If the opponent isn't a good swimmer there is a high possibility that they will drown.






Mizurappa - Violent Water Wave
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Mizurappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja will expel a strong jet of water at his opponent.

Suihashu - Water Wave Hand
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Suiton • Suihashu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will raise their hand into the air and emit a continuous jet of water to disrupt the opponent's attacks. Due to the nature of water, this attack works especially well against smoke based jutsu.

Suijinheki - Water Encampment Wall
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Defense
Suiton • Suijinheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack.

Suiryuudan no Jutsu - Water Dragon Projectile Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Suiryuudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a column of water in the form of a dragon to rise from the water and then strike their target.

Doryuudan - Earth Dragon Projectile
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Anime Only
Doton • Doryuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and create a dragon from the river of mud made after using the Doryuu Taiga technique. This dragon will then spew mud projectiles from its mouth.

Doryuu Heki - Earth Style Wall
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Defense
Doton • Doryuu Heki is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attacks.

Doryuu Jouheki - Earth Style Rampart
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Defense
Doton • Doryuu Jouheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals. Then a large earthen wall will erupt from the ground.

Doryuu Katsu - Earth Style Split
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Doton • Doryuu Katsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals, then place their hand to the ground. This will cause the earth to rise up and split apart. Once the ninja removes their hand from the ground, the earth parting will end.

Doryuusou - Earthen Rising Spears
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Anime Only
Doton • Doryuusou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, spears of stone will raise from the ground to pierce the target. The technique can be countered by an opponent who hardens their body with a stronger Earth Element jutsu.

Doryuu Taiga - Earth Flow River
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack, Defense
Doton • Doryuu Taiga is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and transform the ground upon which the enemy stands into a river of mud.

Iwa Bunshin no Jutsu - Rock Clone Technique
Rank: B
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Doton • Iwa Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes rock to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Iwa Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. If the Iwa Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural rock state.

Daijurin no Jutsu - Great Forest Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack, Defense
Mokuton • Daijurin no Jutsu is a unique Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wood element. The ninja will extend a large mass of spikes from their arm. These spikes can act both to impale the target and as a barrier to protect a comrade.

Jubaku Eisou - Tree Restraint Eternal Burial
Rank: B
Range: -
Type: Attack
Mokuton • Jubaku Eisou is a unique Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wood element. The ninja will form hand seals to create vines of woods to grow from the ground an entangle the target. These vines will continue to grow into a large tree, further restricting the enemy's movements and preventing their escape. Finally the growth of the gigantic tree will be enough to permanently crush and entomb their body.

Jubaku no Jutsu - Tree Restraints Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Defense, Supplementary
Mokuton • Jubaku no Jutsu is a unique Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wood element. The will form handseals and cause beams of wood to emerge from the ground. These beams will wrap around the target to bind them.

Moku Bunshin no Jutsu - Wood Clone Technique
Rank: B
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Moku Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wood element. The ninja will form handseals and cause beams of wood to emerge from their body or a wood source. This wood will morph and form a clone of the ninja, capable of utilizing all the same Mokuton techniques as the original.

Moku Jouheki no Jutsu - Wood Barrier Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack, Defense
Mokuton • Moku Jouheki no Jutsu is a unique Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wood element. The ninja will form handseals and cause beams of wood to emerge from the ground. The beams can converge to form a half spherical barrier to deflect an incoming blast.

Mokuton • Henge - Wood Element Transformation
Rank: B
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Mokuton • Henge is a unique Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wood element. The ninja will form handseals and cause beams of wood to emerge from the ground. The beams will converge around their body to form the shape or individual they wish to transform into. Unlike regular Henge which just transforms ones appearance, Mokuton Henge creates a physical material to hide ones appearance. This technique works best when the copied person is at least partially made out of wood.

Mokusatsu Shibari no Jutsu - Smothering Binding Technique
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Defense, Supplementary
Mokuton • Mokusatsu Shibari no Jutsu is a unique Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wood element. The ninja will form a handseal and extend a beam of wood from their body. This beam will split into multiple branches which can surround and bind a large target. Once bound, another ninja may unleash another jutsu upon the vulnerable being.

Other Information

Relationships: None

Family: 
Nisa - Mother
Shee - Younger Sister

BACKGROUND

Bio: 
Yahiko was born in a small village in the forests of the Marsh Country. Both of his parents were descendants of the proud Senju clan that have somehow managed to survive for so many years. Named after one of the sacred woodlands, Yahiko was destined to become a powerful shinobi. As he grew older, he worked along with his father, who was a carpenter. The village was a very busy village and worked with their craftsman skills, creating many things for the Swamp Village. When Yahiko turned six years old, he, along with the other children of the village, had been herded by Swamp ninja and taken to the village to become shinobi.

It was a bit hard for Yahiko to accustom to the new village. Especially after he had joined the Academy. In the Academy he proved himself worthy of becoming a great shinobi. Under the harsh training enforced by the Kage, he became strong. He learned the Academy jutsu very quickly and he also learned how to defend himself in close combat. Five years later, after proving himself to his teachers and outranking the class in skill, he graduated to the rank of Genin.

Genin Arc

When Yahiko finally became a Genin, he learned how to use the Earth element. He did not have a team due to his overall skill, therefore he was given the title of "Kage's Special Genin". With that rank he felt strong and every single day and night he trained to get stronger. But as each day passed, he started to forget about his parents. The Kage was starting to develop a fatherly bond with Yahiko, teaching him how to control his chakra and increase his physical power. For three long years he trained and mastered his Earth element. Believing that he was ready, he was promoted to Chuunin. Unfortunately, in that same year, the Kage had been assassinated by a Desert shinobi. Swamp declared War on the Desert village and so a time of peace had ended.

Chuunin Arc

Thus, he became a Chuunin but was introduced to the time of War. With little time to train, he pushed himself to the limit, each and every morning, evening, and night....He trained. He learned how to use the Water element and with the two elements joined the War. Yahiko did not like fighting but he felt the need to avenge his fatherly figure by defeating the Desert ninja. He strayed from his village with his band of shinobi and was led by a Captain in a battle. A small village at the coast line of the Sand Country was the setting of such a battle. Swamp was the victor of the battle but with such little men left, they were forced to pull back. Yahiko had survived to live another a day. The new Kage had been appointed at this time of Yahiko's life. He was very cruel and a tyrant! This man noticed Yahiko's ability and gave him the rank of Jounin, also promoting him to Captain in the army. Although he did not like the idea of continuing the fight he accepted. But to strengthen himself even more, he disappeared for four more years....

Jonin Arc

Older and much wiser now, Yahiko Senju lived up to his name in the other minor villages of the Marsh Country. He unlocked his finaly element, Mokuton. With the ability to use this element many people called him "The Gentle Oak of the Swamp". Finally returning to his village, he joined another major battle, this time leading it himself. The battle raged for days but Yahiko defeated his enemies with his power. The boy was feared by many, including his own Swamp shinobi. Returning to the Swamp after defeating the Desert ninja, Yahiko was greeted by many of the cheering villagers. The Kage of the village planned to use him once more to defeat the Desert but Yahiko realized his intention. After a year or so of planning, Yahiko led a revolution against the Kage. Together with his fellow Swamp ninja and other followers he was going to win Swamp

RP SAMPLE:The Jounin leader Yahiko watched as his felllow shinobi fell into battle one by one against the blasted Desert ninja. He supported his comrades the best way he could and gave orders at the same time, "All medical ninja go treat the wounded immediately! All close combat shinobi go support the left flank now!" He glanced at two young shinobi that seemed to have fear in their eyes. This was no ordinary fear, it was as if they had seen a Ghost! "You two be strong! You both are proud ninja and have the strength to help protect our village...Don't worry, I have your back!" Yahiko gave them a smirk and a thumbs up as their faces lit up with hope and the will of fire ignited. Suddenly two ninja from the Desert ambushed the left flank with powerful sand jutsu, "Damn! I didn't know they were this resourceful!" He sped towards the enemy as quickly as he could. "Earth Style: Doryuusou - Earthen Rising Spears!!" Spears of stone rose from the ground piercing the Desert ninja and ending their lives. "Is everyone okay!?!?"
Yahiko and his comrades spent countless hours and days holding off the the enemy Desert shinobi till more of the support came. The battle for the village lasted for days, countless bodies were piled up, most were very close friends of Yahiko. "My friends, you did not die in vain...Because of your brave sacrifice our village is safe! We are at peace once more!" A few days had passed and Yahiko had delivered the mission report to his lord Kage. "My lord, have you recieved my mission briefing?" The lord nodded, "Many were lost...the ninja almost over powered us...I did my best to defend them! I tried my best my lord! Please forgiv-" Before he could finish his sentence the Kage rose up and placed his hand on Yahiko's shoulder. "You did the right thing you gave us all a new chance to live Yahiko. Take the oppurtunity your friends gave you and live on to be a great ninja and leader!" The Senju smiled.....

Bookwoman speaking here. Prepare for the worst.

Before I go modding the rest of your profile, I first have to ask you for a better RP-Sample if you want to claim your jounin rank. You'll ask me why and here is my answer:

What I see is that the diaologue and the descriptions are fairly nice. That was okay. The actual combat portion in there was little to too small. All we saw was an auto hit killing. Not really an exchange between two individuals which makes it easier to negotiate the level of skill that an rper possesses. I cannot make a solumn judgement untill I see a better sample of your character actually fighting and not just some long narration before a quick one sentence burst of action.

Until I see a better sample, I won't mod more of your profile, nor approve it.
Thank you for reading, commenting if needed and changing your rp-sample.

- Bookwoman

RP Sample 2:Yahiko and a band of six brave men patroled the area. They had just took the Gintou coastline from the Desert shinobi, now was time to defend it. "Men, take caution, we could be ambushed at any moment." The men nodded and followed the captain. Woosh! From the top of the buildings shot kunai. Yahiko made a quick seal and looked in the direction of the fired kunai. Large roots shot from beneath the ground and protected the men. "The ambush! Men, it's time for battle!" Ten ninja jumped from the rooftop to battle the Swamp. Yahiko and his band held their ground and waited for the armed Desert ninja to land on the ground and begin mortal combat. "Attack!" Yahiko jumped at four of the ninja while his men took on the other six men. "Let's see what you Desert ninja are made of!" One of the Desert ninja jumped at him and swiped at his nasal bridge only to be grabbed by Yahiko and thrown at the wall of a nearby building. The other two men dashed forward and unsheated their Katana, swinging them at Yahiko. He bent back allowing them to pass over him and backflipped onto his feet again, kicking both shinobi below the chin while doing so. "Three down...One to go!" The last performed hand seal and shot a blast of wind at Yahiko. Yahiko also made seals and jumped into the air, dodging the blast of wind. From the roots used before shot three pillars of wood, impaling the last shinobi. He land on a roof and looked down at his band, the four left. "Our men will be missed...Come, let us report this to the General."

Alright...Uhm, I'll explain what I'm looking for in an rp sample for a chuunin/jounin/higher leveled ninja, since, I'm not quite satisfied still.

In an rp sample, you rp alone, as you know. The goal in this rp sample is to show how strong you are and how you manage your strength. It also shows how good of an rper you are.
When writing rp, there are a few rules, which you know; auto-hitting is forbidden and you need to be descriptive while keeping your grammar, spelling and syntax correctly.

In your rp-sample, I see a few things:
First, I see one big piece of written text; no paragraphs, no separation of the actions, nothing. It is quite annoying to read and most people just skip such text. The best you can do, is skip a line from time to time and do it mostly with spoken text. Like:

Quote :

"Hi"
"Hi" replied Honda. "How are you?"
Jimmy shook his head sadly. He looked in pain.
"Not that well."

See? Try that~

Second, you are making the action too short.
Take an example of your favorite action movie. Some superhero appears against some underlings of a supervillain that aren't too bad. If he could just kick them aside without any effort, it would be boring, no? Try to do the same here. If needed, just make your character fight against only one person, a stronger one for example.
When writing, try to imagine it as in a movie. Make the story "live". We're not asking you to write a novel (D: that'd be unreasonable and mean), but put some more words into the actions. Use examples or other rp's you can find on forums or books or sites to help you :3 dictionnary and thesaurus helps a lot too. I use them all the time while writing~

There o.o I hope it'll help you to write a better rp sample :3 If you got more questions, please ask one of the staff to help you or myself~ We're there to give you some ideas and help~

- Bookwoman

Yahiko smiled, watching his men walk off to file the mission report. A breeze passed through his hair, the coastal breeze. "That was too easy...." He turned around and started walking towards the main camp. Sea birds circled the area, awaiting to feast on the bodies of the deceased. "When will this war come to an end...."

"This war will never end....The Desert and Swamp will be enemies forever and will battle forever!" yelled the small figure from the rooftops. Yahiko stopped and turned around, facing the direction from which the sound was made. "Who exactly are you?" asked Yahiko. The frail looking figure jumped off the roof and landed on the street, made entirely of compacted soil and sand.

"Hehehe, I am Desert Mole! The assassin that was hired to kill you Yahiko Senju! Now, prepare to die Swamp scum!" This man was interesting; on each forearm was a large drill. He wore goggles with a head cap and there were large bags attached to what seemed to be a utility belt. Yahiko took a battle stance and glared at the so called "Desert Mole".

The Desert Mole suddenly burrowed into the ground, despite it being made of compacted soil and sand. Yahiko was baffled! Such a skinny man being able to do that, it was unheard of! "The drills, did he use the drills to do that?" Yahiko looked down at ground, hearing noises coming from beneath him. "He's surfacing!"

The Desert Mole launched out of the ground, his drill aimed upwards attempting to cut through Yahiko. He summer-saulted backwards, avoiding the the drills and landed on his feet again. "Yes, I used the drills to do that you fool! Hehehe!" Yahiko performed a set of hand seals, "I'll make this quick! My Mokuton will exterminate you!" Wooden pillars shot from his shoulder, each one directed at the Desert ninja.

Crack! The Desert Mole sprinted through the branches, cutting through each with the drills! "You're mine Swamp scum!!" Yahiko stared wide eyed and then sprinted forward. The two were going to clash! But then the Desert Mole made a quick brake, jumping into the air and clapping the soles of his sandals together. Explosions triggered from beneath Yahiko, destroying that section of the street and releasing flames. Yahiko was sent flying. He rolled on the ground and hit a building wall. "How did that happen!?"

Smoke rose into the upper atmosphere, the area was a mess! Yahiko stood up and looked up at Desert Mole who managed to get himself onto a building rooftop. "Weeeell, when I was underground I planted several bombs all over my tunnel. And boom! They detonated after a minute or so..." said Desert Mole with a menacing grin. "Now you're dead!!!" Yahiko coughed before forming a wood clone from his body. The replica, once being created, dashed towards the opponent. This was all a distraction.

Yahiko performed a set of seal, the clone blocking the assassin's view. From the clones arms emerged branches, but Desert Mole anticipated this. He jumped onto the branches and used them to push himself towards the clone, where he'd drill right through it. It was too late for the Desert Mole however, Yahiko had finished the jutsu and released a jet stream of water. The powerful stream hit the Desert Mole right on the chest, pushing him into the flames created from the explosion.

Yahiko stopped and dropped to one knee, watching the bombs inside the Desert Mole's bags ignite and explode, killing the assassin instantly. "Defeated by your own weapons......"

RP sample Booky Approved. Now the rest~ Prepare for the worst.

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Personality: Yahiko is a good man with many morals. He is a great shinobi from his village and believes in protecting the things close to him, for instance his mother, sister, and village. There's nothing better than exploring the Swamps surrounding the village and cherishing the nature. Although he is a strong and well known shinobi, it takes a lot to anger this guy.

Alright...He has many morals and we know his likings. But he has no bad traits? No development about the morals? Describe his personality some more into detail please.

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Rank: Title - Jounin / Level - S Rank

Why S-rank? o-o;

Quote :

- 1 Medical Pouch

What's in the medical pouch?

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Suihashu - Water Wave Hand
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Suiton • Suihashu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will raise their hand into the air and emit a continuous jet of water to disrupt the opponent's attacks. Due to the nature of water, this attack works especially well against smoke based jutsu.

Don't forget that it won't be able to stop strong jutsus, espcially those of higher levels (like A ranks)

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Suishouha - Water Collision Destruction
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Suiton • Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element.The ninja does a string of hand seals which then causes a large volume of water to materialize out of nowhere, or a water body. The water can then be directed at the target.

This was a jutsu used by the second Hokage only. Denied because of the special circumstances around the jutsu.

Aaaaand...before I keep on modding jutsus, how come I see -none- custom ones? And your profile reminds me waaaay too much of the first Hokage. D: Add some personality in it. Also, if you have all the jutsus, you won't have to do much in rp-ing. Think about that.

Please edit/fix/change what I already mentionned. I'll look at your profile again once that's done~

- Bookwoman

ima be developing custom jutsu as i train during rp

In your history please describe what happened with your character.

describe wat ? everything right there

o-o There is one problem with the history: remember how Wood is said to be a genetic skill of the second Kage and how only people with his DNA could have it? D: try to make a relation about that~

o_o Pull over, Council coming through.

Mud techniques were unique to the Third Hokage. Normal Earth-element users can't use them. Rock techniques were also unique to Rock ninja; average Earth-element users cannot replicate them.

And about the wood. o3o It's a genetic ability from the First Hokage. If you manage to make a believable explanation for you having the First Hokage's DNA, you can keep the Wood element. Otherwise, nope. ;D

fine i will change my history but ur wrong on 2 counts :/ one the mud techniques aka earth techniques are not unquie to the third hokage i have the proof if u need it :/ second the rock techniques are also earth techniques i can use i have the proof as well if u want it let me knw

Okay, another Council member coming in.

Mud techniques - It was used by several people other then the Third.

Example;

Mud needle was used by an unnamed kumo ninja in episode 193
Mud Indulgence was used by Fuka in episode 67

These are just two examples

So Mud techs are approved

Rock techniques have also been seen used by a few people

Example;

Aggravated Rock Technique Used by Onoki in episode 204

Rock techs have also been seen in use by ninja from the Rock village and Fuka

So Rock Techniques approved



I also approve the wood element without the need of the first's DNA because we have never required of it before




So under these notes you have one approval, however because of all the talk that has happened you need one other approval.

okay thanks

Booky approved. -moves topic-

Enjoy Rp-ing!~

>.< Wrong area! *Move's towards correct position in swamp village profiles*