Gosatu [Done]

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Gosuto

General Information

Name: Gosuto

Nickname: The Invisible Man (Tōmei Ningen, 透明人間) / Phantom of the Sand (砂の怪人 Suna no Kaijin)

Gender: Male

Body Type: Athletic

General Appearance: Gosuto is quite a unique looking man. The complexion of his skin is a tan color, most likely because of constant exposure to the Sun when he was younger. His eyes are a hazel color and his long spiked hair is a dark brown. Not many get to see his true appearance due to the intricately wrapped bandages covering his entire body, giving him a mummy-like appearance overall. Only his eyes are exposed. The Desert village headband rests around his forehead.

Gosuto wears the Desert flak jacket with two Tantos strapped onto the back. He wears the average utility belt with numerous equipment pouches and a brown colored cloth hanging down from the belt. Besides that, Gosuto wears black pants and shinobi sandals made for all terrain.

Personality: Gosuto is an extremely well mannered man. He is very generous, polite, and friendly. There are times where he is seen wandering outside the outer walls of the village. Gosuto enjoys relaxing out in the Desert, especially in the afternoon when it's cool, just before cold fronts come in. There has never been a time where his fuse has gone out...

Other: Gosuto often wears goggles to cover every opening on his body and to protect his eyes from the violent sandstorms.

Age: 19

Height: 6'4ft

Weight: 210lb

Likes:

• Working for the Kage.

• Enjoing the Desert landscape.

• Spying

• Fighting

• Roe

Dislikes:

• Enemies of the Desert village.

• Cowards.

• Swamp shinobi.

• Sushi

~Bio~

Beginning Arc:

Gosuto was born in a small village just South of Desert. Deep in the Canyon region of the Sand country dwelled the villagers of Inuki. Gosuto, the youngest of three brothers, was enrolled in the minor village's Spartan Unit, a training organization that prepared each male child for Desert village. Gosuto had begun preperation at the age of five and from there had gone through many physical and mental tests. When he turned eight he was sent to the Desert village, becoming an Academy Student upon arrival.

By then Gosuto had already known the fundamentals of the Shinobi. Ranking at the top of the class, Gosuto was noticed by the Kage himself and moved to a much more advanced class, the Sandstorm Unit. From there on, Gosuto learned much faster than the ordinary students.

Genin Arc:

Graduating at the age of eleven, Gosuto had become a Genin. Assigned to a team of four, including himself, Gosuto had embarked on many missions. His leadership skills had gotten him a position as team leader. When the time came, he trained for the Chuunin Exams, choosing to do so alone. Around that time, he learned about his elemental affinity, Katon. During the Chuunin Exam, he proved himself worthy of becoming a Chuunin ranked shinobi after defeating his two opponents.

Chuunin Exams:

Four years had passed before he officially was promoted to Chuunin. In that interval he learned how to use his second element, Fuuton. Many of the other villagers were amazed by the fact that he was able to use two elements. During his Chuunin years, Gosuto was assigned to a twenty man task force, the mission, to storm Inuki and take control of the land. Gosuto, now loyal to his village, took part in the mission and defeated all who retaliated. Because of his loyalty and skill, he was promoted to the rank of Jounin.

Jounin Arc:

Gosuto's reputation increased after the control of Inuki; he was definately one of the strongest in the village. At fifteen years of age, he was already an A-Rank shinobi with a third element, Doton. The elders of the village instantly knew that he was capable of using a Kekkei Tota bloodline. Gosuto was sent out to the Mu Desert where he was to learn about Jinton release. For days Gosuto walked in the intense conditions, searching for the one known as Bunshou.

After countless days of searching, Gosuto had finally found the temple in the dune. Within the temple, Gosuto trained with the two hundred and sixty year old man and learned about Jinton release and other techniques. After four years he returned to his village to find a new Kage...

Ninja Information

Village: Desert

Rank: High Ranked Jounin

Elements: Katon/ Fire, Fuuton/ Wind, Doton/ Earth, and Jinton/ Dust

Weapons: Two Tantos.

Equipment:
x 10 Bomb Tags
x 20 Shuriken
x 20 Kunai
x 2 Claymore

Bloodline: Jinton Release - Dust Release through Bloodline expansion. Kekkei Tota

Personal Information

Habits:

• Sleeping
• Watching the Sun rise
• Kicking Sand

Weaknesses:

• Fuuinjutsu
• Genjutsu
• Low Stamina
• Kenjutsu
• Another Dust user.

Strengths:

• Taijutsu
• Ninjutsu
• Incredible sensor
• Immense Strength
• Flight

Fears:

• Nothing on the planet
• The Lord
• Losing his reputation

Subject: Re: Gosatu [Done] Sat Feb 19, 2011 11:41 pm

(I approve this rank in my village you are the first jounin, unless told not from a admin)

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Gosuto's Jutsu

(Three Academy Techniques.)

Dai Endan -Great Fireball
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Dai Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. The ninja will first gather the fire into his mouth and then spew a giant breath of Fire at their constantly.

Endan -Fireball
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows the ninja to emit a jet of fire from their mouth.

Ryuuka no Jutsu -Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Range: Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.

Karyuu Endan -Fire Dragon Flame Projectile
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow a large jet of fire from their mouth.

Doryuu Heki -Earth Style Stone Wall
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Defense
Doton • Doryuu Heki is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large stone wall to help defend against incoming attack. Some ninja will use the jutsu by placing their hands on the ground.

Doryuusou - Earthen Rising Spears
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Doton • Doryuusou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, spears of stone will raise from the ground to pierce the target.

Iwa Bunshin no Jutsu -Rock Clone Technique
Rank: B
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Doton • Iwa Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes rock to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Iwa Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. If the Iwa Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural rock state.

Retsudo Tenshou -Revolving Split Earth Palm
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Doton • Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing anything in it.

Daitoppa -Great Breakthrough
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing their hand to their mouth, the ninja will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way.

Reppushou -Gale Wind
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will send a strong gust of wind towards their target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its deadliness and speed.

Shinkuu Gyoku -Vacuum Sphere
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Fuuton • Shinkuu Gyoku is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seal, the ninja will inhale air and then expel numerous penetrating wind bullets.

Shinkuuha - Vacuum Wave
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Fuuton • Shinkuuha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will inhale air and then rotate their body while expelling arcs of cutting wind. These arcs will be capable of cutting through an airborne opponent.

Shinkuu Taigyoku -Vacuum Great Sphere
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Fuuton • Shinkuu Taigyoku is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will inhale air and emit a large concussive wind bullet from their mouth.

Meisai Gakure no Jutsu -Camouflage Concealment Technique
Rank: A
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Meisai Gakure no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used by Rock ninja. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja can grant themself near invisibility. So far only the Sharingan eye and its revelation abilities has been shown to pierce the veil and see the hidden ninja. It is unknown if the Byakugan can penetrate the jutsu and see the user's chakra circulatory system. (I will not use this during battles and I cannot be invisible when I attack.)

Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu -Base World Separation Technique
Rank: A
Note: Special Bloodline Technique
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Jinton • Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Dust Element. Using his ability to create Jinton, Gosuto will form a hand seal and create a cube. He can increase the size and weight of this cube, giving it high crushing power.

Subject: Re: Gosatu [Done] Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:39 pm

Looks good to me - Approved

Subject: Re: Gosatu [Done] Thu Mar 24, 2011 2:29 pm

Bookwoman here~ Prepare for the worst.

Quote :: Seldom seen wandering outside the outer walls of the village, Gosuto enjoys relaxing out in the Desert, especially in the afternoon when it's cool

It's only "cool" (really, really cold, freezing in fact) in the desert at night. And, he's seldom seen outside the outerwalls of the Desert village and yet he goes -apparently- often outside to relax in the desert. It doesn't make much sense...fix it?

Quote :: Elements: Katon, Fuuton, Doton, and Jinton.

Put the english translations of the elements please. Not everyone remembers/knows the Japanese names of them.

Quote :: Equipment: Everything the average shinobi carries.

Which is? Every ninjas (yes, even average) have a different equipment. Seriously. Don't be lazy and fill it in please.

Quote :: • Flight

Wait. He can fly?...Denied.

Quote :: Fears:

• Nothing on the planet
• The Lord

I need 3 fears. I see only 2.

Spoiler:

Quote :: (Three Academy Techniques.)

v___v Fill those in. A lot of people have them in their profile, Yakate, Bookwoman included in the approved Sand characters.

Quote :: Karyuu Endan -Fire Dragon Flame Projectile
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow a large jet of fire from their mouth. Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu -Mist Waltz Techniq

'Fix' the description. And it's an A rank I think. Check it on Narutopedia.

Quote :: Doryuu Heki -Earth Style Wall
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Defense
Doton • Doryuu Heki is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack. Some ninja will use the jutsu by placing their hands on the ground.

...I see in this a mud technique. Not 'earth'. O.o;

Quote :: Daitoppa -Great Breakthrough
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing their hand to their mouth, the ninja will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way.

And it's a C rank only? .___.; A rank if it can leveling almost everything.

Quote :: Retsudo Tenshou -Revolving Split Earth Palm
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Doton • Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing anything in it.

Again, this is only a C rank? ._.; Fix it.

Quote :: Reppushou -Gale Wind
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will send a strong gust of wind towards their target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its deadliness and speed.

Accordingly to the description, even without weapons, this wind can kill. And it's -only- C rank? ._.;

Quote :: Shinkuu Gyoku -Vacuum Sphere
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Fuuton • Shinkuu Gyoku is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seal, the ninja will inhale air and then expel numerous penetrating wind bullets.
Shinkuu Taigyoku -Vacuum Great Sphere
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Fuuton • Shinkuu Taigyoku is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will inhale air and emit a large concussive wind bullet from their mouth.

Isn't this Shukaku's wind jutsus? If it is, denied, cuz you dun have the bijuu.

Quote :: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu -Base World Separation Technique
Rank: A
Note: Special Bloodline Technique
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Jinton • Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Dust Element. Using his ability to create Jinton, Gosuto will form a hand seal and create a cube. He can increase the size and weight of this cube, giving it high crushing power.

...You got only 1 jutsu for your bloodline? O_o;

That'll be all. Please fix everything I asked you to fix, thank you~

- Bookwoman