Ayaka Kurusugawa

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Kurusugawa,Ayaka

General Information
Name: Ayaka Kurusugawa.

Nickname: Aya.

Gender: Female.

Body Type: Slim curvaceous. Flimsy and frail. Almost fragile to a point.

General Appearance. See my avatar. I have brown hair and dark green eyes. I am wearning dark type clothes. A red plaid skirt, a red type hanging loosely from my neck, and a tight black tank top. I carry a sword with me named "Ketsukei no Hana." This means, "Blood Flower."

2nd Appearance: When I draw my sword, I gain white hair that gleams usually in whatever light illuminates it. My eyes turn a demonic and blood-lusting green color. The emotions such as pain and deadness to them can pierce through to the very inner soul of a sensitive person.

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Personality: Aya is a very cold and demonic type person. She isn't one to trust, or open her heart so easily. In fact she doesn't, at all. She despises this thing called, love, doesn't think it even really exists. She is innocent to a point, but expresses a cold demeanor. She is composed, but emotional. She is one contradiction within herself. She isn't very social, or helpful, doesn't like to be kind, but underneath it all is someone who is.

Other: When she has memory flashes of her past, she goes into a "vulnerable" mode. This is where she begins to act like her former self. Her other self before the massacre in her village occurred. Before she grew up. This personality is kind, and sweet. Gentle, and fragile, sensitive, and lots of other positive things. She can feel and is open much unlike the normal Aya.

Age: 12.

Height: 4'9''
Weight: 89-91 lbs.

Likes: Miso ramen, blood, fighting (sometimes), sword, learning.

Dislikes: Liars, love, dumplings, people (usually), annoyances/hindrances.

~Bio~
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Ninja Information
Village: Rogue.

Rank: Genin.

Elements: Water.

Jutsu: (See next posts to come.)

Bloodline: None.

Clan: None.

Personal Information
Habits: Thinking, reading, killing.

Weaknesses: Composed and uncaring, no will, naive (at times), clouded, unguarded.

Strengths: Hatred, Lonliness, Sword, Intelligence, Judgment.

Fears: Nothing... you shall know of. {Losing everything.}

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~Ninjutsu~

Name: Water Clone.
Rank: E.
Description: The user summons chakra in the form of water to the outside of their body. Thus, making a clone of themself made entirely from water. The chakra used in this is very minimum and a a bottom rank, basic genin jutsu.

Name: Elemental Blade Art: Water.
Rank: D.
Description: The user of this jutsu unsheaths their sword. Summoning and concentrating the releases if chakra on the blade, the water surrounds the blade and the arms of its user. The water around the sword hardens into somewhat of an icy substance and the water around the arms of the user staying in liquid form. Using their blade, they slash at you, the water's rough edges slashing into the skin and then dissipating as the sword gashes deeper. The user may use the water on their arms respectively as they choose.

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~Genjutsu~

Name: Genjutsu Art: Mist.
Rank: D.
Description: The user generates their chakra and concentrates it to their hands. This releasing art causes a mist to form and thus impair the enemy's sight. Within the mist, the user can now move freely, and unrestrainingly. They may disappear and reappear as they please. The chakra control and amount used in this jutsu contributes to how long this jutsu may be sustained as well as how fast the user can move.

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~Taijutsu/Sword Techniques~

Name: Sword Blade Dance.
Rank: E.
Description: The user unsheaths a sword. This move was specifically made when Ayaka took down the killer in her home. She combined a series of dance moves along with slashes that not only block attacks but offend the enemy as well. It is almost as if she is dancing with the waves of the ocean, her movements are flowing like liquid.

Name: Sword Rain: Alpha.
Rank: E.
Description: The user needs a sword to use this technique. A simple series of slashes, yes? No. The iniator of this attack stabs and jabs their sword tirelessly into the enemy at a fast pace. When done, they slash upwards and jump back regaining their balance and composure.

Name: Sword Rain: Beta.
Rank: E.
Description: The user demonstrates this move in a similar fashion to Sword Rain: Alpha. The user after taking a final slash of the opponent may continuously connect the Sword Rain attacks. During this move, the user kicks the enemy up into the air. After doing that, they reappear above them. Slashing them down to the ground in sporadic points of their skin, when finally reaching the ground, the user jabs the sword hilt into their stomach. After that, regain composure.

Name: Sword Rain: Gamma.
Rank: E.
Description: The user may continuously connect this to the other Sword Rain moves. This move is similar to that demonstrated of the fashion in Sword Rain: Beta. After the opponent recovers from the jabbing of their stomach. The user then dashes at enemy. If fast and strong enough the user may be able to cut off one of the limbs of their opponent.

Subject: Re: Ayaka Kurusugawa Tue Mar 23, 2010 8:59 am

Looks fine to me, approved

Subject: Re: Ayaka Kurusugawa Wed Mar 31, 2010 3:35 pm

v-v not fine for me sadly D: again jutsu troubles Aya-chan~

Quote :: Name: Water Clone.
Rank: E.
Description: The user summons chakra in the form of water to the outside of their body. Thus, making a clone of themself made entirely from water. The chakra used in this is very minimum and a a bottom rank, basic genin jutsu.

o-o check on Naru wiki and leaf ninja. This is definitely not a E rank jutsu.

Quote :: Name: Genjutsu Art: Mist.
Rank: D.
Description: The user generates their chakra and concentrates it to their hands. This releasing art causes a mist to form and thus impair the enemy's sight. Within the mist, the user can now move freely, and unrestrainingly. They may disappear and reappear as they please. The chakra control and amount used in this jutsu contributes to how long this jutsu may be sustained as well as how fast the user can move.

This is a ninjutsu. o-o; Sorry.

Quote :: Name: Sword Blade Dance.
Rank: E.
Description: The user unsheaths a sword. This move was specifically made when Ayaka took down the killer in her home. She combined a series of dance moves along with slashes that not only block attacks but offend the enemy as well. It is almost as if she is dancing with the waves of the ocean, her movements are flowing like liquid.

E ranks can't kill. End of story. x.x; Make of it a one time move you need to relearn or something like that =o but make at least of it a B or A rank.

Quote :: Name: Sword Rain: Alpha.
Rank: E.
Description: The user needs a sword to use this technique. A simple series of slashes, yes? No. The iniator of this attack stabs and jabs their sword tirelessly into the enemy at a fast pace. When done, they slash upwards and jump back regaining their balance and composure.

Nya~ Nice move. But C rank at least o.o

Quote :: Name: Sword Rain: Beta.
Rank: E.
Description: The user demonstrates this move in a similar fashion to Sword Rain: Alpha. The user after taking a final slash of the opponent may continuously connect the Sword Rain attacks. During this move, the user kicks the enemy up into the air. After doing that, they reappear above them. Slashing them down to the ground in sporadic points of their skin, when finally reaching the ground, the user jabs the sword hilt into their stomach. After that, regain composure.

I'd say C rank at least. B rank would be better~ ^^;

Quote :: Name: Sword Rain: Gamma.
Rank: E.
Description: The user may continuously connect this to the other Sword Rain moves. This move is similar to that demonstrated of the fashion in Sword Rain: Beta. After the opponent recovers from the jabbing of their stomach. The user then dashes at enemy. If fast and strong enough the user may be able to cut off one of the limbs of their opponent.

o-o B rank.

Otherwise, all jutsus are nicely made and your choice is good. o-o Sadly, the ranks aren't good D: