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 Keretsu Kousoku [Done]

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Okamirui Ukiyo

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PostSubject: Keretsu Kousoku [Done]   Sat Feb 13, 2010 1:56 am

General Information
Name: Keretsu Kousoku
Age:12
Height:5'6
Weight:140lbs
DOB: August 9th
Appearance: A pair of byzantium-colored eyes. His hair being a black suit, nothing out of the ordinary. The male's eyes were as such. While the iris of his eye was indeed byzantium, at the top-left corner of his eye, or Northwest region, was a white figurine. It appeared as if the iris possessed two colors. The byzantium actually was eclipsing the white section, or retina, which was why it appeared to be a partial eclipse occuring within the male's eyes. Keretsu was dressed in mostly black, however bore purple warm up pants which flowed down into his foot wear and scrunched up there. A short-sleeved black shirt overlapped by a black jacket, in which the tail of the jacket stopped at his calves. The interior being a byzantium. Two collars were on the jacket as well at the neck area, ending a few inches above his jaw line. The sleeves of the jacket were short, ending just above his elbows by a couple of inches. On the back of his jacket tail was a black scabbard placed in a horizontal fashion, and the hilt of the blade was at his right. The hilt was mainly black, but down the center of the hilt it was tinted purple on both sides. Two small clips were attached to the tail of the jacket and the mid-section of the scabbard, keeping it connected. |

Bio:

Birth -Childhood
The male known as Kerestu Kousoku was born in the Unmarked Territories, near the Mountains. Kerestu grew up in this cold place, it was natural for him and his members of his clan to conceal themselves and train within that regional area. Kerestu trained in that place nearly majority of his life. The Young male practiced with his parents his Hyouton and Eclipse abilities, it was perfect place. Yet, they have a routine leave from there to get supplies for natural needs. He trained with his parents until he was 9 years old, which he would have to leave to go with the clan's trainer to train with him outside the village.

Academy
Keretsu eventually joined the Academy with his trainer's permission, and the academy's permission at the age of 9. He made friends, but they weren't long life friends, but friends. At first, he didn't know what to say to them, and some people didn't want to be around him, due to the natural cold aroma, he gave off. His Academy teacher saw him unique, and mature for his own age. However, he tried the hardest to be the best, seeing he had natural affinity for Ice based. He learned the basis of Ninjutsu, and of a Shinobi. Due to his quick thinking traits, and nature of learning fast, he excelled rather quickly. He soon graduated at the age of 12.

Genin

After his gradation from the Academy, he took a trip to his home village with his Home trainer. The trainer had been a good friend, yet strict Sensei. However, his time of learning under the Village trainer was over. However, as a gift of reaching Genin, he was given the Clan's Custom blade, which he would get naturally, but this fitted best as a gift. In addition, he gave him several scroll of Clan based techniques, that he can work on learning on his own. In addition, he had to go home to unlock his phase training. Which as time passed, he eventually took his phase trail training, and unlocked the first set of the training, After completion of training, he was somewhat equipped and set his way back to his Squad, and they would eventually do missions, and show his future potential of Eclipse and Hyouton Elements, and water element.

Personality: : Calm, sometimes laid back in fights, brave. He sometimes may be shy, to new people he meet, however, he'll eventually open up. Secondary, he can be quick-witted, and bold when feeling confident in his abilities, maybe a bit overconfident. At times, when priority comes first, like doing missions or anything of great important, he may end up taking a silent treatment approach.

Special Characteristics/Traits: He's agile, and a quick thinker and learner. He can be very observant when missions and other things of importance to him come in the line of sight. He has an unique cold aroma, that he can generate around his being in five feet. He's very elusive, and agile, an speedy individual.

Likes:Making friends, making long-life friends, the moon's lunar appearance, missions, and peaceful moments.
Dislikes: Unnecessary fighting, Arrogant people, cold individuals and mean people.

Ninja Information
Rank:Genin
Village: Sand Village
Combat Strengths: Ninjutsu,Stealth, Kenjusu, and Speed
Combat Weaknesses: Taijutsu, Katon Ninjustu, and Genjutsu.
Mental Strengths: When friends are in danger, he becomes more tactical in battle. He's a quick thinker and learner.
Mental Weaknesses: when pressured fighting alone can tend to make unnecessary mistake, if the opponent has him in a tight situation. Overconfident moments, may make he put less effort into proper offensive.
Equipment:
Scabbard (On the right side of his body at hip.),
Clan Blade ( Sheathed in Scabbard),
10 Shurikens (In pouch)
Three explosive notes (In pouch)
Ten Senbons (In pouch. )
6 Kunai. (In pouch)
A pouch (on the back of his waistline)

Jutsu: [Next Page.]
Element(s): Hyouton - Ice Release [ Main]


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PostSubject: Re: Keretsu Kousoku [Done]   Sun Feb 14, 2010 8:20 pm

Jutsu's:


Name: Ecliptical Phase Release
Rank: E
Range: N/A
Style: Kousoku - Ecliptical Arts
Description:
This is merely an technique that will unlock the Phase, the phases being stated in clan info. This merely being an small application of energy to break the seal.

Ninjutsu
Name: Bushin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Range: N/A
Style: Ninjutsu
Description:
The Clone Technique has been the foundation to academy level jutsu across the globe. In this jutsu the user is to create several intangible copies of oneself. This jutsu is especially for covert missions into enemy territory as well as distracting or confusing enemies on the battlefield. However, when a copy is hit with a sufficient amount of force or poisoned, it will disperse immediately.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Range: N/A
Style: Ninjutsu
Description:
The Replacement Technique has been used in many a sticky situation. Shinobi have been known to use it in order to dodge anothers attack as well as to serve as a distraction to help evade them in and off the battlefield. This jutsu is comprised of a swift action, usually replacing oneself with a nearby object or person so that they can evade an attack, or avoid being found.

Name: Konbi Henge - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Range: N/A
Style: Ninjutsu
Description:
The Transformation Technique is primarily used in order to transform oneself into another person, animal, or object. This is a great asset to a person who is attempting to go undercover, provided that they can do a flawless transformation, that is. However, sloppy transformations can often times lead to a Shinobi's downfall.

Name: Hyouton Seikon - Ice Pressure Shock
Rank: D
Range: Short range: 1 - 10 Meters ( Max: 32 feet )
This technique involves a powerful leap forward followed by a spinning kick with both legs in succession, the second kick being aimed lower in case the intended target ducks the first. In a combination, you apply your Hyouton based chakra in your legs. The contact of the legs must be made in order for freezing to take effect. The freezing being the area of impact of one foot length.


Name: Tsūga Hyouton - Piercing Fang
Rank: D
Range: Short - Medium; 1 - 45 meters, (Max: 147 Feet)
Style: Taijutsu
Variation; Piercing Ice Fang
Description:
The user spins at a ferocious speed and delivers many powerful beast-like attacks when contact is made with the target. This attack is done alone but it can be done with a partner, making it more effective.
Variation info: It's the same method, just due to the cold aroma around him, it adds onto a slight freezing effect. The freezing effect is only freezes over the area of contact is landed, after a physical impact is done.

Name: Kinobori no Waza - the art of tree climbing
Rank: C
Range: - N/A
Style: Ninjutsu
Description:
Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.


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PostSubject: Re: Keretsu Kousoku [Done]   Sun Feb 14, 2010 8:56 pm

Yo give you a tip before the mods get to you. It's already been decided that Body Flicker is above D-rank, which I totally agree with. So just so you can go ahead and edit it now you'll probably have to get rid of it.
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PostSubject: Re: Keretsu Kousoku [Done]   Sun Feb 14, 2010 8:59 pm

I did. It seems like everyone feel that way about it. -Shrug.- No skin off my back.
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PostSubject: Re: Keretsu Kousoku [Done]   Sun Feb 14, 2010 9:09 pm

Well at least you are understanding.

>_> -flees-
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PostSubject: Re: Keretsu Kousoku [Done]   Sun Feb 21, 2010 1:24 pm

Having Ice at Genin is a bloodline dude.And even so must be trained. ._.
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PostSubject: Re: Keretsu Kousoku [Done]   Sun Feb 21, 2010 3:36 pm

o-o and Sand village is closed as far as I know~
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