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PostSubject: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Tue Dec 29, 2009 4:56 pm

Kingu flew them straight into the center of the village, mountains visable in every direction. Caves littered them, dark and mysterious to all. But below them, the once booming town Surp had left, was now practically deserted.
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Tue Dec 29, 2009 5:01 pm

As Youji was waiting he looked down and saw a lot of mountains then he observed that they were in the center of a deserted village. He always wondered why this village was deserted but it's no time for it now. We can find this out later. He then sighed and made a serious face. He was ready for anything that will happen to him
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Tue Dec 29, 2009 5:04 pm

Surp snapped his fingers and Kingu vanished in another great burst of smoke. The two were now freefalling towards the ground. Surps cloak flung behind him as the wind rushed past them. His left hand reached out for the boy but his face, his face held no worries at all.
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Tue Dec 29, 2009 5:10 pm

Okay the big dragon dissapeared and they wer in the middle of the air. Now they were falling. Well he stoped worring as in his mind came the fact that his sensei did this on purpose. So nothing to worry about. He just closed his eyes and waited
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Wed Dec 30, 2009 3:43 pm

Grabbing Youji around the waste, he pulled him close and whispered some words to Youji. "This may feel a bit uncomfortable, even painful as we go through the doorway." He the moves his free hand into a formation of a strange symbol. One not of the usual twelve and it is only of one hand. Then, his lips move and begin to form strange sounds as if it was a made up or ancient language.

"Hold Tight!" He yelled as a gust of wind picked up around them and quickly gained speed as it swirled. And from this gust of wind formed a twister in which they rode all the way down until they were just about to hit the ground. But as they made contact, the ground was no longer solid and instead, it seemed to absorb their impact as they sank deeper into the ground and into darkness. A surge of pain and tingling feelings flowing freely in and out of their bodies as they continue.

Finally, after half a minute of this strange and yet unbearable sensation, their feet touched softly upon solid ground as they had at somepoint been turned to stand upright. And no sooner had they touched earth, did torches spring to life around them. Lighting a massive circular room made of stone with no obvious doors in site. But the torches did a splendid job at lighting the room, too well infact. The flames lit up every crack and vanquished every shadow. Surely the work of chakra infused flames.
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Wed Dec 30, 2009 4:03 pm

Youji felt that he was grabbed around the waste and then he heeard his sensei telling him to hold tight. He kept his eyes closed and then felt some gusts of wind around them. Then he started feeling pain, but he tried to ignore it and kept his eyes closed. After half a minute the pain stoped. As he sensed they touched the ground he opened his eyes and saw that they were in a room with no doors and tourches all around the room. He then looked at his sensei and said

"This is the place were we shall do everything?"
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Wed Dec 30, 2009 4:07 pm

"Yes Youji. It is a Safe room I made as Kage when I lived in Crater. It is a good place as any to work."
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Wed Dec 30, 2009 4:10 pm

wow wait.....he was kage here? But why did he quit. Well i should leave this for another time. Now it's time to do the job.

"Ok sensei i'm ready so when do we start?"
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Wed Dec 30, 2009 4:16 pm

He taps his foot on the ground and a table and two chairs appear before them. "Sit." He says as he himself pulls out a chair and rests.
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Wed Dec 30, 2009 4:18 pm

He puts his doll next to the table and then takes a seat. Well he has to let him rest for a while cause he thinks this is a hard process so he needs to recharge. He then waited there for new orders.
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Wed Dec 30, 2009 4:22 pm

"Youji, what do you know of puppets?"
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Wed Dec 30, 2009 4:28 pm

"Well i know they are used as weapons by puppeters and that you can control them with chakra strings. They can have many hidden weapons. They can have poison. That's kinda everything i managed to remeber"
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Thu Dec 31, 2009 1:33 pm

"Not bad if you're looking at the simpler things." He positions himself to better look at Youji. "A puppet is a realization of surpassing human limits. Though they can be made into any form, each one entitles its own special traits which makes it unique. Yours, it is made to look exactly as you are now. Body type, skin color, everything is meant to make people believe that you are still human. But It goes beyond your normal abilities. It contains a massive amounts of dangerous needles specialized to enhance your control over them (Special alloy). Every joint has been made with a 360 degree ball joint allowing you to bend and move in unnatural ways."

He then pulls out a scroll from his pocket on the inside of his robe and sets it on the table. It gradually rolls open and suddenly, it looks as if Youji had appeared on the table uncontious. "A marvelous piece of work if I say so myself. It took me some time to come up with great ideas for it, but I believe I made it all work out in the end." He smirked at the puppet and waited for Youji's reaction.
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Fri Jan 01, 2010 4:11 pm

Youji listened carefully to his sensei's explanation about puppets, So every puppet is unique in their own way. Next thing is that the puppet he made for him was made to look exactly like him. Well that was a good thing. He still wanted to keep all of this as a secret. So his new weapons will be needles? He will need some training with that thing. And he even can move in unnatural ways from other people. That will surely give him advantage in battle.

He sees his sensei taking out a scroll and then rolling it open on the table. What's that? It looks like Youji was there sitting on the table. If he didn't knew this was a puppet he could easily mistake it for a normal person. It looked incredible. Youji was amazed by the work his sensei did. He then looked at him and said"If i didn't know this was a puppet made for me, i would said it was my twin brother. This puppet is truly a masterpiece"

Youji was so excited about thi. He couldn't wait to make the transfer. But now let's be patient and see what we have to do. He looked at the puppet then at his sensei then again at the puppet and said"So what do we have to do for the transfer?"
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:20 pm

"We'll get to that. First, there are some more things to tell you about this puppet." He reached forward and traced his finger down its hand and then picked it up and held the tips to Youji. There, if looked closely, Youji would see a needle sized hole on each finger tip, even the thumbs. "These small holes will allow you to eject very sharp and strong needles attached with wire thread, which is held in designated spots along the arm, or just as easily attach chakra threads."

"As well as for an instant defense incase an opponent gets to close and somehow seems too much a waste of time, there are compartments located just above the elbow, knee joints as well as in the neck that contain a toxin the mistifies in contact with air. This is always regenerating as the toxin is made by a special bacteria." He slowly points to each part as he speaks. But he dares not open them do to the toxic properties of the gas.

"There is also semi-ejection points located on the knuckles and foot of the puppet. These can protrude poison tips needles to immobilize your opponent while using taijutsu. As well as causing more than just physical and internal bruising. But the next few features are what I think you'll like the most." He sets the arm of the puppet down and smiles. The entire course of the puppets skin is enfused with a special alloy that gives it added strength and a nice ability to absorb and focus electricity. This will make Lightning users less a threat as well as your lightning abilities more severe."

"Then the last major part, is the synthetic muscle structure. This will allow your puppet to actual grow in strength over time. But it will take more svere training. The synthetics aren't as easily built as real muscles. But the end result could land you close to the amazing strength of Tsunade herself."
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:29 pm

Youji started listening to the introduction of the puppet. As Surp-sensei was explaining Youji was amazed by the variety of things that he could do with them. everything is so amazing and even more, he can make the puppet stronger if he trains. He couldn't posibly ask for more. He then looked at his sensei with an amazed face "This puppet is just too awesome it's a work of art if i could say that. This puppet can't stop amazing me"
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:37 pm

Smiling more, Surp was glad to hear his work was approved. "Now, the transfer as you are interested in is pretty complicated, for me at least. For you, it's quite easy." He stood up then and looked down at the table and opened another scroll. This one looked as if it had a simple seal written on it, but again, a close look would show that the simple large seal had hundreds, thousands, of seals woven together in a neverending cycle.

"I must use my chakra to write this type of seal onto your puppet. Once I start, I can't stop till it is complete. When done, the puppet will be ready for transfer and another weakness will be removed."
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:39 pm

Youji listened carefully then he wondered about what he has to do. "So my job is?" and another weakness will be removez?"Ow and sensei what weakness are you talking baout?"
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:44 pm

"Your job Youji, is to lend me chakra if I so happen as to get too low on my own. You will also be drinking jasmine tea while I am working. This will help relax your body allowing the transfer to go more smoothly. In all, the work of the seal will take an hour, two hours at most."

He then looked over at another table across the room. There, on top of the table, sat several tea cups and a small kettle. Off to the side of them was a portable heater. "You'll find the tea over there. Without the tea, the process would be much tougher to complete. Just don't overload on it." He smiled and then looked back towards the body of the puppet and slowly examined it.

"A puppet can only be made several ways. One, is to just make it out of pieces that fit together with moving parts and dangerous weapons. Able to be controled by means of chakra threads so the puppeteer can stay safe and send the puppet itself into battle. The second is what some use in order to make the walking dead. A type of puppeteering that you use a seal to make something that would normally be dead, appear to be alive. You can give it a sense of existance, but it can only do what the seal allows it. Third is what the infamous Sasori did to himself. That is, take a vital organ or something of yourself and encase it in a cylinder that is then put into a puppets body. By doing so, the puppet itself becomes you with the help of a seal of course."

He then takes a breath and smiles. "Of course, each one has its own major weakness. The first ones weakness lies in the puppeteer. Take out the puppeteer or his use of connecting his chakra strings to the puppet, and the puppet is practically dead in the water. The second ones weakness lies in the seal. A simple seal release jutsu or hitting the part where the seal is imprinted (Destroy the seal that is) and the puppets functions and uses cease. And the thirds is just as much dangerous as the others. Take out the cylinder, break it, corrupt it, etc, and the puppet dies."

His smile then changes to a smirk as he reaches once again for the scroll with the seal on it. "This is my version of number two. But improved by my own means. Instead of making one simple seal and hiding it inside the puppet in hopes it won't be found, I use many, many, many seals that all interlink with eachother. In doing this, no seal release technique can kill you, and you'll be able to regenerate back to this form as long as a piece of you the size of a pinky exists. My seal is so flawless, that it will even fool the Byakugan and Sharingan Eyes into thinking that the seal is just one seal instead of many. So, in essense, the only way to kill you is to destroy your entire body in one go."
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Thu Jan 07, 2010 2:39 pm

Youji listened to everything his sensei was explaining about the doll. After that he will need some training but first let's make the transfer. He putted some tea in a cup and then placed it close to him then he looked at his sensei"Ok now what should i do?"
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Thu Jan 07, 2010 2:42 pm

But Surp didn't answer Youji. For he was already intent on making the sequence of seals on the Youji puppet. Surps chakra clearly seen as he wove it into the skin and body of the puppet like sewing thread into silk.
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Thu Jan 07, 2010 2:46 pm

Youji was looking at his sensei and at what he was using. He was watching carefully and waited for any orders he will give him. He tooked a sip from the cup of tea and continued to watch over his sensei.
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Thu Jan 07, 2010 2:51 pm

Over an hour went by with Surp working vigorously and Youji sipping his tea. It wasn't till Surps chakra began to show signs of slowing down in its output, did it become appearent that Surp was just about finished. The whole puppet seemed to be glowing with Surps chakra now and it was like looking at a radiant lamp. Whatever this seal was, it was powerful, that was for sure.

Finally, Surp raised his hands from the puppet and sighed. "Done." He said with a satisfied tone.
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Thu Jan 07, 2010 2:58 pm

For an hour Youji was looking at his sensei. As he was watching he saw that the puppet started to glow. It looks so interesting, that seal must be powerfull. As he saw his sensei raising his hands from the puppet and that he said he was finished he looked again at the puppet and then at Surp-sensei and asked "So what do i have to do now?"
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PostSubject: Re: Arrival Of Youji and Surp   Thu Jan 07, 2010 2:59 pm

"Come over here and lay beside the puppet Youji."
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