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PostSubject: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:11 pm

General Information:

Name: Uchiha Maru Yuizaki
Age: 24
Height: 5 feet 8 inches
Weight: 150 pounds
DOB: August 18

Appearance:

Maru has a angry look most of the time when its needed ,but when he is happy or normal his look changes that of a merstrious person. Maru's style is classic,but not to classy because in his past years fights came naturally so he dresses to impress and to fight as well. Maru tries to keep his style together and neat because as Kage of Aurora responsibilities come at a high rank.


Personality:

Maru was angry with the world and still is. Him being an ex assasin he obtain the enjoyment of fighting as well as taunting weaknesses he finds. Maru is a very cocky person as well as trying to get under peoples skin. Maru however can be a responsible friend and enjoys helping out those who need it. Maru is an over all good person but rage is just in his nature.

Academy arc:

Maru's grew up slowly noticing that the people around the leaf village,that he grew up in, and the Legendary Uchiha clan, lacked talent so he vowed to surpase everyone including his Father and The Legendary Uchiha clan Leader Madara. Maru spent his time training all the times with the other students and genins around the area. Maru formed a group where him and the other students fought like the chuunins at the chuunin exams there clan holds, Maru of course being the leader of the gang since he was the youngest student to achieve his sharingan so soon. When the Gennin exams came everyone from the gang except Maru Failed the exams and some other gifted academy students passed with flying colors. This Made Maru extremely angry as he trained more before the genin cerimony to impress his proctor, where he unlocked his Second lvl sharingan through anger.

Genin Arc:

Maru excelled with his lvl 2 sharingan ,but he belived he lacked power. He wanted to make the other Uchiha ninja that humiliated him suffer at any cost. Maru trained all the time with his sensei to the point where the sensei couldn't teach him anymore by restrictions. From there Maru started to get anxious and wanted more expeirience so he began sneaking arounf the leaf village and stealing valuable items selling them in the blackmarket for money. Maru with all this money had an idea...he went to the mission board and posted up missions that needed chuunin lvl ninja to investigate an area where the leaf vilage items we supposed to be held. Maru then disguised himself with the simple transformation jutsu to look like an older assasin and jumped the chuunin ninja who took on the mission.

Sooner or later that spot gained the reputation of rouge assasins who stole from the leaf village. Sooner or later jounin came an anbu came. Maru gained so much knowledge as he unlocked his wind and lightning element and gained his 3rd lvl sharingan. Maru gained enough power to be considered an anbu in a genin childs body. Maru was in the genin exams and surprised everyone that he achieved the Final lvl sharingan before the chuunin exams. That day was the day that the chuunin exam lasted only one day because Maru obliterated the competition and was chosen to be the gifted chuunin.This was the day Maru finally was able to say he proved his worth.

Chuunin Arc:

Maru Being the gifted chuunin was able to serve in his clan anbu under his father just a week after the Chuunin exams. The mission that they were to explore the rouge assasin nest. Maru was weary at this point cause his ather was no fool. It didn't take long for Maru's father to start to suspect his own son of being the killer. The way he ninja were killed, the elements that were used pointed out to Maru. Maru managed to keep hush about the whole thing by hidding clues while he took other missions. It took a while for Maru to successfully hide all the clues so he tooked Many missions soit wouldn't be suspicious. From there Madara deemed Maru Jounin for doing many missions for his clan.

Jounin arc:

This was the time Maru's life changed as he knew it. Maru was 18 years old at this time when his father finally gathered enough information to charge his own son with all the deaths of the uchiha. Maru's father sent his carrier pigeon to the clan and to the village to send more men as he tried to take care of his son. Maru knew that tis would be the moment he would have to prove to his father that he has surpassed him. Maru ends up killing his father as he felt angry and more powerful. Maru noticed his vision changed that he saw everything more percised as he looked in the puddle of blood to see the mangekyo sharingan.

At that moment Maru's old sensei , and Anbu Members came from the clan and leaf village as he used his new powerful genjutsu to mow down his enemies before him as he fled back to the village challengeing Madara. Though Maru lasted long Maradra ended up defeating him as the village rose up to the injured Maru. Maru fled the village becomming a real rouge ninja.

Madara however being the 1st imortal uchiha did not give in for he saw something in Maru. Madara saw a little bit of himself in Maru. Madara sent Ninja after ninja, Party after party to Maru. Maru struggling to survive and not being able to rest because of the constant pro-suit.

Kage arc enormous War:

Maru soon mastered amataseru to make himself survive longer as he reached aurora after 5 years of constant fighting. Maru joined the village and shortly after challenge the kageship of Aurora and became kage. After that Maru was able to regain his strength becoming more blind. Maru soon challenged the uchiha clan and the leaf village to war. As the village and his friend at the time Xzeno Icisia held off the ninja that would come near Maru and stormed into the Uchiha clan village where Madara and Maru have a sharingan and ametaseru Battle. Madara explained to Maru the blindness affect. And Maru knew he has no sibiling to absorb the eyes from. Maru had a theory though..Kill Madara the 1st uchiha and absorb his eyes since the bloodline is similar it should work. After a 3 day fight with Madara Maru ending up victorios as he tested his thoery....It indeed worked as he achieved an advance form of the eternal sharingan his eyes always spinning from the rage he and Madara possesed. Maru claimed his rightful place as Uchiha Clan Leader and stood as the Nightmare Kage Leader thus explaining why the uchiha moved from leaf to Aurora.


Likes:His wife, son and new added familly.

Dislikes: Arrogance, cowards.

Ninja Information:

Rank: Kage
Village: Aurora
Combat Strengths: Slyness with Taijutsu and Seal Master
Combat Weaknesses: Close combat fighter, Gets angry and tires himself when enemy isn't defeated quickly.
Mental Strengths: Intellectual, Resistsant to Genjutsu cause of mental training and the use of his sharingan help greatly
Mental Weaknesses: May over think possible choices, Anger

Equipment:

Enhanced Arm gauntlets and greaves
Description: The rare metal made with my seals make the metal unbreakable and can absorb the Wind and Lightning Element from the chakra my body gives off. Thus giving then wind and lightning properties.

Conductible wire (Enough to cover the area like a spider web). Explosive tags, Chakra sealing tags, Senbon, Kunai , seal tags, Jutsu encasing scrolls

Jutsu: Next post

Elements: Wind , Lightning , Plasma, Ametaseru , Crystal, Seals, Poison, Magnetism and Gravity (Bijuu)

Relationships:

Sawaii Uchiha- Wife
Mirai Ekisho - Sister
XzenNenshou - Brother
Neo Uchiha - Son
Emaneryu kousikan'i- Brother
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:16 pm

Healing~

Name: Chakra Scalpel
Type: Unknown rank, Offensive, Supplementary, Short range (0-5m)
This medical technique forms one's chakra into a small, sharp blade. This can then be used for highly accurate incisions necessary for surgeries and anatomical dissections. Unlike regular scalpels, the Chakra Scalpel can actually make cuts inside the body without actually creating an open wound, limiting the risks of an infection.The Chakra Scalpel can also be used offensively, although it requires great precision to be effective. Because of this requirement, using the Chakra Scalpel offensively is highly unusual. In heated combat, even the greatest medical-nin won't be able to exert the precision needed to make fatal cuts, but it can still effectively cut muscle tissues and tendons, rendering the target immobile.

Name: Mystical Palm Technique
Type: A-rank, Supplementary, Short range (0-5m)
This medical ninjutsu allows the user to speed up the body's natural healing process by sending chakra from their hands into a wound or afflicted body part. This allows the user to heal a patient without the need for medical equipment or surgery, making it highly useful on the battlefield. It can be used to treat both external and internal injuries. It is vital to match the amount of chakra used to the severity of the affliction or injury. This requires a great amount of chakra control. Because of this, only a few highly skilled medical-nin are able to use this technique. By sending an excess amount of chakra into the patient's body, the user can overload the patient's normal circulation, trapping them in a comatose state.


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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:16 pm

Crystal~

Name: Crystal: Hexagonal Shuriken: Wild Dance
Rank: C-rank
Type:Offensive, All ranges
Description: Maru throws a vast amount of crystal shuriken to his opponent. He can use a much advanced form of the attack where crystal particles surround him and condense into numerous shuriken.

Name: Crystal Armor
Rank: A-rank
Type:Offensive , Defensive, Short-range (0-5m)
This jutsu allows Maru to become encased in a thick sheet of crystal to protect him from attacks and poisons.This armor fills the pores in his skin protecting him from anything that may harm his insides. Example poison , blood seals tct.This armor can also aid Maru in performing stronger physical attacks. The crystal is transparent and can only be noticed by light reflecting off it.

Name: Crystal Release: The Gods' Crossings Technique
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive, Supplementary, Mid to long range (0-10m+)
This jutsu will create a long stream of sharp crystals to bind or pierce a target.

Name: Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Blade
Rank: C-rank
Type: Offensive, Short range (0-5m)
Maru can quickly form a blade made of crystal on his arm, and use it almost similar to how a ninja would use a Tanto. Blades can be formed on both arms if needed.

Name: Crystal Release: Crimson Fruit
Rank: b-rank
Type:Defensive, Supplementary, Short range (0-5m)
Maru can create a dome of crystal to surround a target. It is high durable from both external and internal attacks.


Name: Crystal Release: Arrow of Light
Rank: A-rank
Type: Offensive, Defensive, All ranges
Maru will encase himself in a prism of crystal. While doing this, he can hover in the air but is unable to maneuver, however is protected from all but the strongest of attacks. In addition, he can focus his chakra into light through a prism and launch a powerful heat blast.

Name: Crystal Arm Spear
Rank: C-rank
Type:Offensive, Short to mid-range (0-10m)
This jutsu allows Maru to create a large sharp rod attached to his wrist which he can used to impale a target. It resembles Crystal spear.


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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:17 pm

Normal~

Name: Poison art: Black Mamba claws
Rank: A rank
Type: Modification
Description: The user does the necessary hand signs as the users nails thicken and sharpen, (Thickness and sharpness similar to snake fangs and are extremely durable because of chakra enhancement). The user then can take the pills containing pure poison from the deadliest snake in the world. "Black Mamba". Chakra strands from the users nails travel through the body and inside the users neck catching the poisons and putting in the users own dna withing the poison to negate the poison in the users own body. With this the user can preform venom, quick attacks. One slash counts as two snake bites from the Black Mamba

Venom information
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Name: Poison art: Mamba fog
Rank:A-rank
Type: Thick fog
Description: The user (Anytime after the use of Poison art: Black Mamba claws) does the necessary hand signs and retracts there nails back to normal length and size as the poison rushes to there neck and the user can spit it in fog range.

Name: Universal Assimilation Jutsu
Rank: Unknown rank
Type: Modification.
Description: Using this jutsu, the user can merge with another object and take on its properties to avoid any damage.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:18 pm

Wind~

Wind Release: Wind clone
Rank: C-rank
Type: Unknown
Description: The justu creates a clone that can looks like the user in everyway.Normal clones would poof when dealed with,but the clone implodes where they were struck and cause a minor wind current about a foot away from them.(The wind current are similar to swords strikes.)

Name: Beast Wave Violent Wind Claw
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive, Short to mid-range (0-10m)
Description: This justu uses chakra to infused with and condense a mass amount of wind to form a massive demonic-like claw extending from the user’s dominant hand to strike and grab a target, as well as deflect any weapon or attack. In addition to making it a deadly short to mid-range weapon, the extending claw also carries tremendous force that can devastate anything in its path without affecting the user, making it useful for dislodging solid and heavy object

Name: Wind Release: Rotating blades style
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive, Short to mid-range (0-10m)
Description: This jutsu will infuse wind-based chakra into bladed weapons. The user can than manipulate the blades in a spinning manner to attack the target.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:19 pm

Mist~

Name: Hidden Mist Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D-Rank
Element: Mist
Description: This jutsu envelops the surrounding area in a dense mist, reducing visibility within the affected area. The density can be controlled by the user, allowing them to create a mist so thick that even they can't see through it.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:19 pm

Seal techniques:

Curse Release- Clone technique
Rank: C-rank
Type: Unknown
Description: The justu creates a clone that can be used with any seal. Normal clones would poof when dealed with a seal but this clone is very human like.

Curse Release - Life manipulation art.
Rank: A-rank
Type: Supplemantary
Description: This seal can give curse made clones. This gives clones life basically allowing them to bleed and feel pain.


Name: Five Pronged Seal
Rank: A-rank
Type: Supplementary, Short range (0-5m)
Description: This jutsu produces a powerful seal that is used to block or disturb the flow of chakra in a target. Once the seal is completed, the target will become weaker and unable to fight for a short time. This is because an odd-numbered seal creates an imbalance when placed on top of an even-numbered seal.


Name: Five Pronged Seal Release
Rank: A-rank
Type: Supplementary, Short range (0-5m)
Description: This jutsu is used to remove seals of up to equal power, like the Five Pronged Seal.

Name: Blocking Technique Absorption Seal
Rank: No-rank
Type: Defensive, Short range (0-5m)
A highly advanced sealing technique that is capable of absorbing any chakra, regardless of any special or nature transformation, and dispersing it within one's body by spinning the chakra within one's body in the opposite direction. As a result, this technique can absorb any ninjutsu technique, regardless of power, without harming the user. The User can only hold One technique at a time and can use it against the enemy. (Power of the jutsu is based on how much chakra the user uses to activate the seal. The user cannot keep the technique very long because it doesn't coincide with the users element. Thus the proper definition to this tech will be absorb , supply technique with chakra and redirect the attack more powerfully)
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:20 pm

Lightning:

Lightning Release Armor
Classification Ninjutsu
Type Lightning Release
Class Defensive, Supplementary
Range Short-range
By wrapping his body in a layer of Lightning chakra, the user can electrically stimulate his nervous system and speed up his neural synapses to react faster to danger and push his physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and power. His strength is also heightened enough to make his strikes cause enormous amounts of damage to whatever they strike. The armor also increases his defense, drastically reducing, if not completely negating, damage from incoming attacks as even a direct Chidori was barely able to pierce .

Liger Bomb:
Classification Taijutsu
Type Lightning Release
Class Offensive
Range Short-range
After covering himself in his Lightning Release Armor, the user grabs his opponent and lifts them high into the air. Then, using his extreme strength, he smashes them head first onto the ground in what resembles a powerbomb maneuver. This is devastating enough to shatter a large area of the ground itself on impact.

Guillotine Drop
Classification Taijutsu
Type Lightning Release
Class Offensive
Range Short-range
After covering himself in his Lightning Release Armor, Maru jumps into the air and preforms a downward kick on his opponent.

Lightning release: Attack of rageing gods
Element: Lightning
Rank: A-tank
This is recomended with use of lighting armor. The user uses them self as a ground for a large thunder attack from nature itself. When used with lighting armor the armor becomes stronger and the user quicker and powerful then ever.

Lightning Release Shadow Clone
Element: Lightning release
Rank: B-rank
This technique allows the user to make a shadow clone infused with lightning. Because it is a shadow clone, it is able to perform jutsu and interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. If the clone is injured, it will revert to its natural lightning-state, at the same time electrocuting whatever it is touching.

Tornado Lightning
Classification Ninjutsu
Type Lightning Release
Class Offensive
Range Short to Mid range
Maru generates lightning-based chakra in his palms that he can whip around in order to attack his opponent.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:21 pm

Ametaseru/sharingan techniques ~

Release: Kagutsuchi
Rank: B-rank
Named after the Shinto God of Fire, this technique shapes the inextinguishable black flames of Amaterasu into spikes that both shield the user as well as burn and pierce the opponent if they touch them. This technique seems to be controlled by Maru's right eye, as he was covering his left when using it.

Copy jutsu:
This technique uses the Sharingan to counter an opponent's jutsu and use it against them. This jutsu only works against certain opponents,opponents who are lower ranked then you, and Sharingan users can only copy one Jutsu at a time.(Jutsu may be mastered after battling using it 5 times successfully to use the copy technique again)

Demonic Illusion: Burning Paper Body:
This genjutsu requires the Sharingan and eye contact to be activated. The illusion traps the victim in a dark empty space where their body is made of paper that burns from toe to head while the user is watching. The purpose of this jutsu is to use the target's vision of their new form to reduce his/her dexterity, making it harder for the victim to battle or perform hand seals.

Demonic Illusion: Mirror Heaven and Earth Change:
Using the Sharingan's jutsu-copying abilities, the user can turn any genjutsu back onto its original user.This jutsu can make the opponents attack stronger as a counter but cannot copy it unless the opponent does the same jutsu twice, and the Sharingan user doesn't counter thus doing the Copy jutsu.

Demonic Illusion: Shackling Stakes:
The genjutsu prevents the Sharingan user's mind from being taken over by an opponent. The opponent is pierced and immobilized by illusory yokes, making it an effective means for torture and interrogation.

Ephemeral:
Unlike any other genjutsu, The user does not need to make eye contact with the target to use this technique, instead activating it by simply pointing at them. Crows flock from the user and turn into shuriken that bombard the opponent. They then experience the sensation of their body parts turning into their closest friends.

Mind-controlling Dōjutsu:
This technique allows the user to control the mind of their opponent. It was a dōjutsu of the highest class, as the victim doesn't even realise they are being manipulated.It also seems that unlike a number of other Sharingan related techniques, it doesn't require direct eye contact, as Danzō never removed the bandages that hid it from view.

Sharingan: Negative Confusion:
The user sends a flash from there eyes which binds the foe in confusion.

Mangekyo justu/tech:

Amaterasu (Divine Illumination Jutsu):
This attack seems to be extremely strong, deadly it is said the its flames are hotter the the sun itself. Although it can destroy almost any surface with its flames, it causes a lot of strain on the user.The attack resembles a Black ball of flame.

Kamui:
By focusing the Mangekyo Sharingan on a particular point, The user can force that point to collapse in on itself, ultimately sending everything in the vicinity to another time-space. Kamui costs a large amount of chakra to perform.

Tsukiyomi (Illusionary Underworld Moon):
A special technique that can only be used by the Uchiha clan who posses the Mange Sharingan. The technique creates an illusion which can reflect on the past or just create an illusion where the user does to the target whatever he wants (ex. stick swords into the enemy's body over and over again). This technique is used to attack the opponents mind and destroy his/her spirit. The events which go on in the Tsukiyomi are translated into 3 days (72 hours), while in reality only 3 seconds pass. This attack is another strain causer on the user and if used more then once, it can tire him out to the point of fainting.

Pupil Technique: Destiny Threat:
An advanced form of Amaterasu in which a shockwave of Black Fire is not used. Instead, the first creature to be reflected on the users pupil sees black flamed animals (Of the users choice ) to attack the enemy. This attack causes the Sharingan to be inactive for the remainder of the fight.

Tsukuyomi Mode:
This technique is a variation of the Tsukuyomi. The user transforms the Tsukuyomi into a barrier that slows the opponent down. This does not happen physically but rather makes the opponent think they are being held back by a barrier.

Magen: Jikei Yugami - Demonic Illusion: Suicide Distortion
- A genjutsu used to torment and distort the opponents mind and senses, affecting their inner most fears of reality. the jutsu differs in power between users.
- Handseals: tiger, serpent, dragon, serpent
- Rank: A
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- Effect: the surrounding area is chakra controlled by the user to literally use the area as a illusion play ground to toy and torment the opponent with violent images of bloodshed and dark consumptions (learned this after i came back form the dead. used it on sasuke first chance i had XD):Itachi

Mangekyo Sharingan Combo(Left eye)~Sacrifice to Shinigami
Rank- Unknown

Description: This requires three Mangekyo Sharingan users surround an opponent and focus their time manipulation powers from their bloodline at the same target. The left eye used in this jutsu will turn time forward, while the right eye would turn time back. This is the left eye. Such a large concentration of this time manipulation launches time so far ahead that the opponent and 3 feet around him is cast into the future where we no longer exist and the Shinigami has returned us to the void. This jutsu will thrust the opponent into the age of the void where nothing exists any longer and all is dead. This has a 3 foot radius around the opponent and this jutsu can always be spotted because all life ends suddenly. A large black blank spot where the earth, life, even the air stops and no longer exists. The void will remain there and after every 10 years or so will eventually consume 3 more feet returning it to the void as well. That is why this jutsu is forbidden.

Kyouten Chiten - Mirror Heaven and Earth Change
Art: Genjutsu
Rank: Unknown
Type: Counter
Range: Equal to Genjutsu Countered
Chakra: 1.5x the Chakra of the Genjutsu Countered
Description: Magen • Kyouten Chiten is a Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. Using the copy and counter functions of the Sharingan eye, the Uchiha clan member can stop the sensory spell cast on their body and reverse it back on their opponent.
*Note: Success of the Release depends on Genjutsu skill and judge discretion. Can only equal or counter lower ranked techniques.
Limit: Uchiha Clan.

Amaterasu - Goddess of the Sun (Heavenly Illumination) Technique
Rank: A Rank
Type: Attack
Range: Close (0-5m)
Description: Amaterasu is a Ninjutsu technique, which uses the Mangekyou form of the Sharingan eye to create a mysterious black fire. This powerful fire can then be used to cut through a strong barrier and is said to burn for 7 days and 7 nights. Because of the amount of chakra needed to use the technique, it can only be used on a very limited basis daily.Limit: Uchiha Clan. Mangekyou Sharingan Activated.

Tsukuyomi - God of the Moon
Art: Genjutsu
Rank: S
Type: Attack + Supplementary
Range: Close (0-5m)

Description: Tsukuyomi, named for the God of the Moon, is a Doujutsu illusion technique, which uses the Mangekyou (Kaleidoscope) ability of the Sharingan eye. This highly advanced technique cannot be used extensively because of the toll it places on the user. To utilize the illusion, the clan member will look into the eyes of his opponent and cast a Genjutsu spell on them. The spell takes place in the mind of the one affected. While the jutsu is cast, the one it was cast upon is at the total mercy of the clan member. The clan member has full control over space and time in the jutsu and can place the one affected through any hell they desire for any length desired. The technique itself only lasts for but a second in reality, but the one affected could have lasted through several days of pain. Such exhaustion could destroy an opponent’s will to fight and even cause them to fall into a coma. It is said only another Mangekyou Sharingan user can repel the technique.
Limit: Uchiha Clan. Mangekyou Sharingan.

Kamui – God’s Majesty
Art: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Far (10m+)

Description: This Doujutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that uses a form of the Mangekyou Sharingan eye to launch a long-range attack. To begin, the user focuses on an area of the target. The surrounding area then begins to warp and collapse in, quickly reducing the surround area to nothingness.Limit: Uchiha Clan. Mangekyou Sharingan Activated.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:22 pm

Summonings:


Wind , and Lightning pro-suit hounds:
Hounds created from the users elements with properties of the best ninja hounds everywhere they can comunicate with Maru just simple by barking because Maru understands the language of wolves.

Wolves details:

2 wolf contain Wind cutting Auroras and Harsh powerful howls.
2 wolf contain Lightning quick speed and attacks. When these wolves bite they paralyze on impact.
Last wolf is the leading sharingan wolf and it contains both elements with out the anhancemence( Quick, though not as quick as lightning, powerful, though not as powerful as Wind, But extremly cunning with its lvl 3 tomoe Sharingan)

Number and restrictions: All 5 can be summon at one time.
Abilities: Wolves excel in speed, slyness and searching of enemies
Delta formation (Dogs get into a delta formation and prepare for a prestigious attack)

Summonings jutsu:
Hypnotic howl:
Type: Genjustu
Distance: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Element:
Effects: Paralysis, mind corruption
Description: The dogs surround the user and howl spreading a paralyzing song. This song sends the opponent into a genjustu for pro-suit dog torture. After hypnotic howl is used the wolves dissipate after because this justu take pushes them to the limit.

Soul shareing
Type: unknown
Distance: Can only be used if dogs are in delta formation
Element: nonw
Description: The beats of the hearts of all the wolves and the user merge together allowing the user to transfer bodies with the wolves as long as the beat doesn't change. This requires a focus to master this technique.

Giant Amertaseru Wolf (Amertaserus Hound Kinichiaru): Kinchi was Maru's the wolf that taught Maru the launguege of the wolves and helped him master blaze manipulation when Maru obtain his Mangekyo.

Jutsu's : Tag team with what ever the summoner does.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:25 pm

Seven Tails Demon information:
Name: Kengekishukun ~Uchiha XzenMaru~
Animal: Unknown, (Usually takes on a dog demon-human form)
Characeristics: Able to use any weapon known to man,Magnetism
Extra Info: This Bijuu is currently the weakest of all the Bijuu. It usually walks around in its human form, and since it has spent too much time that form it has grown weak. It has lost to all the Bijuu.

(Unleashed Bijuu Form)
The host will be able to draw chakra from the Bijuu and use it as his own.The chakra of the Bijuu will allow him to run faster and it looks like time has slowed down in his eyes so he will be able to dodge things like jutsu with out using jutsu of his own.The charka also strengthens Kenjutsu by 1 rank.

(First Stage)
The host begins to sprout a tail as he remains completely normal as if nothing were to happen reamianing in his human form.The host will strangely feel lighter increasing his speed and mobility.He will also be more resistant to gravity and magentism.He can also cast jutsu without handseals.

(Second Stage)
The host begins to sprout another tail once again feeling no different before or no change.The host begins to notice he has magenitism ability and can control and bend metals at willl.He can reshape or reform any metal into a weapon of some sort and make it levitate off the ground.

(Third Stage)
The host will sprout another tail and notice some changes in his body he starts to have slight pawish hand sort of hands and legs and they will have a keener sense of smell.There magentism skills have grown alot stronger since the last stage. The user can summon random normal weapons from in the area to swing at the opponent without even touching the weapon itself.

(Fourth Stage)
The host sprouts another tail as he is enwrapped in an aura of his own he turns into a dog like demon half human half demon.The host will have minor capabilties like Pein's Shinra Tenshi tech but with alot stronger force and can pull or push the opponent closer or further from himself.

(Fifth Stage)
The host sprouts another tail and starts to extract his fangs from his mouth. He will have greater control over gravity and magentism.He is able to defiy gravity in order to levitate off the ground and float or jump higher and father distances.The host will also be able to even control metal made from chakra itself.The user will also be able to affect minor time and space.

(Sixth Stage)
The host sprouts another tail as even the Bijuu itself didnt know it had this type of power.In this stage the user can claw rits into thin air to use to attack or defend itself as long as the user creates 2 of them to enter and escape from.Over use of this ability can cause the host to lose control of the bijuu and permanatly lose it from its body.

(Full Bijuu Form)
The host sprouts its last tail as the skin of the Bijuu consumes the host's own.The host will be able to seize complete control over gravity,magentism.The user can make the playing field and everybody in it as heavy as 20 tons while he himself is light as feather and can seize flight capabilites.The host will also be able to roar as giant meteors would rain from space homing in on the opponent.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:45 pm

Looks fine ~ Accepted
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Fri Dec 25, 2009 10:20 pm

How...do you know Crystal jutsu? thats a bloodline trait ya dork XD
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Sat Dec 26, 2009 8:01 am

he won it in the Halloween event
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Sat Dec 26, 2009 1:15 pm

Okay, wtf. o_o

Madara Uchiha is eternal, not immortal. o.o He survived for over 300 years, according to DoS timing. o.o

Maru is 24 years old. o.o How in hell does 24 years of combat experience exceed that of over 300 years of combat experience? I mean, think about it... Maru doesn't even fight too intellectually, he fights with rage and spite. Would that rage and spite actually be able to destroy THE Madara Uchiha? ... What's more, we don't even know if Madara survived all these years. Heck, Danzo might even kill him now. [/Reference from recent manga]

The first thing wrong with your power-origins.

The second is, no matter what, an Uchiha will only, and only, gain the eternal mangekyo sharingan after killing a direct blood relative, be it brother, father, mother, or sister. Killing Madara Uchiha will not get you eternal eyes. Period. Madara Uchiha is NOT the founder of the Uchiha Clan. Madara Uchiha was an exceptionally gifted Uchiha, who, along with his brother Izuna Uchiha, took leadership of the clan. I repeat, Madara Uchiha is NOT the first Uchiha. So stealing his eyes would bring no change to your sharingan eye at all...

... And about your mangekyo techniques...

Each and every person's mangekyo is unique. Therefore, it is impossible for you to have Kakashi's Kamui. Madara Uchiha may have created most of the Uchiha techniques, but he cannot possibly create mangekyo techniques. Besides, Kakashi's mangekyo isn't even supposed to be mangekyo, since he is not Uchiha, and he somehow turned his three tomoe sharingan into mangekyo. Only because he was a remarkable ninja. Recap of all: Mangekyo techniques are unique to each person.

The Amaterasu is a technique unique to Itachi Uchiha. Sasuke Uchiha had received part of it when Itachi gave it to him. It is not a global-wide element for all mengakyo users. I repeat, amaterasu is unique to Itachi Uchiha. Unique to just Itachi; transferred to Sasuke. I doubt Madara Uchiha could even use amaterasu.

Tsukuyomi is indeed a technique capable to be used by any mangekyo sharingan user. However, it is possible to break through this doujutsu without another mangekyo sharingan, as Sasuke broke through Itachi's Tsukuyomi during their last battle. And you forgot to mention the incredible stress it causes upon the user's chakra, and even more stress on the user's eyes.

And the rest of your mangekyo techniques? That forbidden jutsu of yours that uses three mangekyo sharingan users? Absolute god-mod. You can't simply manipulate time to create an area where your enemy dies; just like that.

... That pretty much sums up the faults with your mangekyo. Oh, and should I mention that since there are no more female Uchiha clan members alive in present manga, the remaining Uchiha clan members will have to mate with normal kunoichi? This means that your bloodline-abilities should be halved; yep, low chance of you being able to use the sharingan at all.

...

Your equipment. Unbreakable metal gauntlets? Instant god-mod. No questions asked.

Your poison jutsus uses pills. I do not see poison mamba pills anywhere in your equipment.

...

Your fighting style.

...

You seem to be adept at not only taijutsu and fuuinjutsu [Like your combat strength says], but also ninjutsu, genjutsu, dojutsu, and kinjutsu? Like... wtf are you dude. I'm glad you're not an expert at kenjutsu as well...

...

Your clone techniques.

The manga expressly states that Chiyo, who had tried her hardest to bring life to puppets, came to a conclusion, which said that to give life to one, another life had to be lost. And her technique? It was lost when she died to revive Gaara. She lived for over 60 years to discover this. Maru Uchiha, with his 24 year-old life of rage and hatred, found out how to do what all of Sunagakure tried to do already?

...

You have... medical ninjutsu?
Medical ninjutsu is given to a special branch of ninja. Do you know why there is a special breanch for medical ninjas and combat ninjas?

Because some ninja do not have the capability to fight. Some ninja have a calm, pure mind. Some ninja simply refuse to use their chakra to destroy. They learn medical ninjutsu instead. They may have powerful qualities, like Tsunade, who had incredible strength, but all in all, they use their strengths for good. You, however, have so many offensive and destructive qualities it's scary. A medical ninja goes to combat with his/her medical jutsu, which include poison. I do not see how you came to learn such medical ninjutsu.

...

Seals.

I've already explained what's wrong with the clones.

I don't have any ideas on what 'numbers' have to do with chakra and sealing, so I'll overlook that.

The Blocking Absorption Technique is god-mod. It can block any ninjutsu. Key words here are "block" and "any". You do the math.

...

Elements.

...

You. Have. A total of. 9 elements.

So many things are wrong just in that.

Kakashi himself said to Naruto that a ninja is born with a single chakra affinity, and can master not more than two chakra affinities in his/her life. Any ninja will have tiny chakra affinities for all elements, which explains how Kakashi was able to use Water Release jutsus. Kakashi's chakra affinity was Lightning Release, which explains his ability to use Chidori. Naruto's was Wind Release. Sasuke, Fire Release, and after intense training with Orochimaru, Lightning Release.

... It is virtually impossible for someone to master 9 elements. In fact, there are only 3 people who are known to be able to use all 5 BASIC elements. Kakuzu literally stole the hearts and chakra of others. Rinnegan users can use all elements by default.

And the new element and jutsu limits, say that a person may not have more than 6 elements, including bloodline/jinchùriki bonuses.

...

Jutsus...

I've typed too much to find out faults with those.

Therefore, after thorough rechecking and revising, your profile is not approved. By me. Anyway. Admin authority goes above mine; it's accepted if Tsumi says so.

All above facts and theories are directly derived from Naruto wikia.

P.S. A 24 year old man who's 5 feet 8 inches? Short.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Sat Dec 26, 2009 1:24 pm

Oooh okay and DANG! O.o talk about a lot of revisions...sorry Maru x.x
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Sun Dec 27, 2009 7:38 pm

Im not changing anything its the same accepted character i just reorganized it more so it looks neat. O.o
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Sun Dec 27, 2009 7:42 pm

Dude obviously you don't read the series thoroughly the seals are all of orochimaru so not god mod. I did my research on Madara so do yours he is a spirit and travels bodies he sees worthy. =/
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Sun Dec 27, 2009 7:47 pm

Well what ever - (this is my alt) and this account has Tsumi's approval!
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Mon Dec 28, 2009 3:29 am

...

I don't see any seal that is of Orochimaru, unless you're talking about the life manipulation art? Yeah, that's Edo Tensei; bringing back the dead.

Block Absorption Technique was Nagato's jutsu, used by the Preta Path. Nagato's paths couldn't perform any jutsu except one; unfortunately, Naruwikia doesn't state that it's a rinnegan jutsu, so I suppose you can keep it.

The theory that Madara is a spirit is only fan-made. We don't have exact proof of this theory, yet. Again, I have no right to say that it is not possible. But don't question my knowledge on the series; I only trust three sources, the series, Naru wikia, and leafninja.

o.o And that wraps up my debate. Although I highly disapprove of it, your profile is approved...
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Mon Dec 28, 2009 2:03 pm

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Blocking_Technique_Absorption_Seal

This technique isn't a bloodline tech so anyone can use it and its a seal.

and my elements come from events and bloodlines =/
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Mon Dec 28, 2009 6:00 pm

Uhm...can I place a few rules of the site here?

You can't have this much elements o-o even from events

http://dawnofshinobi.forumotion.net/ninja-registration-f1/elements-and-jutsu-limits-t951.htm

o-o it's said in here that a Kage/ex-kage can only have 3 main elements, 2 combinated elements and one bloodline element.

Considering that you have 9 elements, which are:
  • Wind
  • Lightning
  • Plasma (...is that an element?)
  • Ametaseru (Isn't it an element only given to Sasuke? And since we have no idea how it's made, or used with which elements, shouldn't we leave it to only the canon character of the anime/manga?)
  • Crystal
  • Seals (is that even an element?)
  • Poison
  • Magnetism (O.o never saw it anywhere said as an element...)
  • Gravity (Bijuu) (Also, is that an element? Nagato used it in a few jutsus, but it's never said it was an element...And also, in the Bijuu list, it's said that magnetism is your bijuu's power, not gravity...)


Also, in the same rules, are stated which elements are used in DoS or not. o.o So, I'd check that over again too...

What follows next is kinda personal opinion, but I still think it's worth to be talked over...

And some points that Yaka pointed out hasn't been discussed over or changed yet...
Like, how did a 24 years old Maru kill THE Madara Uchiha?...

Or the Mangekyou techniques. Like Yaka pointed out, each mangekyou is different and has it's own abilities/jutsus...

Also, which hasn't been explained is that there are no Uchiha's left over except Sasuke...So, if he married some normal kunoichi, the sharigan will never have the same strength as before...

Your gauntlets and the missing pills in your equipment haven't been changed either...

Your fighting abilities. Okay, you are atm supposed to be the supreme Uchiha. But still. When th can a 24 years old Kage learn all those techniques and master it? O.o Madara had like 300+ to learn all this o_o but a 24 years old can't learn all that in such short time span. Even with sharingan. Even Kakashi couldn't master everything with his sharingan.

Medical jutsus...Same thing as Yaka said, so, I'm not explaining it again...

And...I won't go any further...So, anyways, if you don't want to change anything, I'll just answer that some of the basic rules of the site aren't followed. Which I think that you as Webmaster should follow them...(and yes Maru, I'll have to edit my profile too if we're indeed going to follow the rules completely and I'm well determinded to follow them)

I'm terribly sorry for keeping pointing this all out, but atm, I can't accept this profile, even thought it has been accepted by other mods/admins...
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Mon Dec 28, 2009 6:19 pm

Asa, if a element is acquired by a site event it negates all restrictions. So crystal and mist are fine. His bijju gives him magnetism and gravitation so those are fine too. His original jutsus where wind and lightning which form plasma so that's fine as well. Ametaseru is a uchiha element. The poison is obtained by use of pills it is not a element.

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p.s. change your age to something more suitable please
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Tue Dec 29, 2009 4:38 am

o.o Once again adding that Amaterasu was unique to Itachi and Sasuke Uchiha...
o.o Power over Gravity is not exactly an element. o.o;;
According to the bijuu index, the user only realized he/she has magnetism after sprouting two tails.
o.o And yeah, you still haven't mentioned how many pills you have in your equipment. o.o Unlimited use of pills is... well, yeah.
o_o And use of seals is not an element, it's called 'fùinjutsu' o_o;;

And now that you've said it, I basically have only 1 element as kage, since sand was an event element. o.o I hereby claim the right to train... 5 more elements. >~>
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Maru (Revised)   Tue Dec 29, 2009 5:29 am

Okay lets list out maru's elements to see how they work;





  • Wind - one of maru's original elements and 1 of his 3 "main/basic elements"
  • Lightning - one of maru's original elements and 1 of his 3 "main/basic elements"
  • Plasma - one of maru's original elements and his 1 "advanced/combination element"
  • Ametaseru - is actually called "blaze" - it is unknown if it is something only sasuke can use or if its the Uchiha's bloodline element and until it is stated what it is or not will be allowed to count as his "Bloodline element"
  • Crystal - An element he won in the Halloween event so it does not count towards the elements he can use
  • Seals - Is NOT an element but a type of jutsu as yakate stated
  • Poison - Is not really an element but something gained by a special pill he takes in battle. I will ask that Maru puts how many pills he caries with him into battle and i will allow no more then 3 pills
  • Magnetism - the element Maru can ONLY use after going into his second state of his bijuu
    Quote :
    (Second Stage)
    The host begins to sprout another tail once again feeling no different before or no change.The host begins to notice he has magenitism ability and can control and bend metals at willl.He can reshape or reform any metal into a weapon of some sort and make it levitate off the ground.
  • Gravity - something only capable at fifth state of his bijuu but MINOR abilities at stage four.
    Quote :
    (Fourth Stage)
    The host sprouts another tail as he is enwrapped in an aura of his own he turns into a dog like demon half human half demon.The host will have minor capabilties like Pein's Shinra Tenshi tech but with alot stronger force and can pull or push the opponent closer or further from himself.

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    (Fifth Stage)
    The host sprouts another tail and starts to extract his fangs from his mouth. He will have greater control over gravity and magentism.He is able to defiy gravity in order to levitate off the ground and float or jump higher and father distances.The host will also be able to even control metal made from chakra itself.The user will also be able to affect minor time and space.

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    (Sixth Stage)
    The host sprouts another tail as even the Bijuu itself didnt know it had this type of power.In this stage the user can claw rits into thin air to use to attack or defend itself as long as the user creates 2 of them to enter and escape from.Over use of this ability can cause the host to lose control of the bijuu and permanatly lose it from its body.

    Quote :
    (Full Bijuu Form)
    The host sprouts its last tail as the skin of the Bijuu consumes the host's own.The host will be able to seize complete control over gravity,magentism.The user can make the playing field and everybody in it as heavy as 20 tons while he himself is light as feather and can seize flight capabilites.The host will also be able to roar as giant meteors would rain from space homing in on the opponent.
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