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Kazuki Hatoba

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(I got so bored of waiting for this ending to come so I am just gonna post it. Let me know how you all think of it. This story is written in episode like format so this is the final episode.)

The smoke had cleared all around the field as kazuki stood their breathing heavily. The blood from his wounds rolled down his cheek as he stood atop his fallen enemy. The so called God of Element was thus forth defeated by the legendary Sage of Fist! Kazu smirked as he stepped back and let his opponent get up.

"You have proven that the Human race still is capable of miracles. You have certainly changed my belief on how humans act and think Kazuki. I humble your effort and the sacrafice that you made to meet the Gods of Elements in combat. I also congradulate your friends for such a job well done." Said Kami no Souchi.

He looked around at the young warriors who had accompanied Kazuki on this trip. How they all supported him and fought by his side till this moment had finally come. His look of encouragement and pride suddenly turned to a sad frown as he turned to face Kazuki once more.

"You have proven that we can forgive the humans for what they have done to the world. You have also taught us that we are in fact the ones at fault here. You have done so much young Kazuki though only one obsticle stands in your path. The earth is to baddly damaged and there is only one way to fix it. We must offer a sacrafice someone who is capable of staying here for years upon years to provide energy for the earth's recovery. So I am said to say that your journey may be a failure." Stated Kami no Souchi saddly.

Kazuki looked all around him to his friends that smiled at him incapable of hearing the dreadful news that the God of Element had just told him. He then took a deep breath and stared back at the God with eyes of determination.

"You need a sacrafice then I shall be that sacrafice!" Kazuki stated.

His comrads would hear this and suddenly realise what was going on. They tried to run and protest but the force field from the previous battle stopped them from doing so.

"Kazuki!!!!!!!! NO DONT GO!!!!!" Screamed Akane as she banged n the invisible barrier.
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The god nodded understanding the level of sincerity this man had for the world he lived in and the people he fought so hard to protect. He then raised his hands into the air as the floor below them started to glow. Kazuki turned to his friends and shouted at the top of his lungs.

"JUST YOU WAIT!!!!! I WILL COME BACK WHEN THE EARTH GETS BETTER TRUST ME GUYS!!!"

Saying that the sky grew dark as kazuki started to fade away. Akane screamed and cried begging that he would stop as he walked closer to the barrier and placed his transparent hand against hers.

"I promise I wont be gone for long." Kazuki said smiling as he continued to fade.

Akane with tears in her eyes nodded and trusted her love with the desicion he made. With that the Legend known as Kazuki Shikimori.... the last of the Shikimori fadded into the wind.

(This next part goes really well with this song.)



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HxNKTXUYVdA&feature=related
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The god nodded understanding the level of sincerity this man had for the world he lived in and the people he fought so hard to protect. He then raised his hands into the air as the floor below them started to glow. Kazuki turned to his friends and shouted at the top of his lungs.

"JUST YOU WAIT!!!!! I WILL COME BACK WHEN THE EARTH GETS BETTER TRUST ME GUYS!!!"

Saying that the sky grew dark as kazuki started to fade away. Akane screamed and cried begging that he would stop as he walked closer to the barrier and placed his transparent hand against hers.

"I promise I wont be gone for long." Kazuki said smiling as he continued to fade.

Akane with tears in her eyes nodded and trusted her love with the desicion he made. With that the Legend known as Kazuki Shikimori.... the last of the Shikimori fadded into the wind.

(This next part goes really well with this song.)



[url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HxNKTXUYVdA&feature=related[/url]
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-2 years later-

The scene shows a small comfortable appartment building with a heavy coat hanging on the wall showing that it might be around winter time. There is a girl typing on her laptop as the words are clearly shown.

~I suppose that you are wondering how the story ends? Well we had a memorial service for Kazuki at the village chapel. Everyone was there and we were all mourning for our lost for several days. We decided to try our hardest to fufill Kazu's last wish, to bring peace to our world for once. We went to the Kagee summit and brought up our argument. Though at first it didn't seem that they would be willing on giving up their fighting abilities, but eventually they agreed with a little help from the Gods.~

The scene would then change showing the girl walking around in a modern Japanese City. The girl would seem as though she were about 17 years old as she wore her big winter jacked with a scarf tied around her neck. Though the computer was gone the monoluge continued in the girl's voice.

~After the world started to recover and with the new peace finally achived we were capable of advancing our civilations. In two short years we were capable of turning our small shinobi villages into citys that could rival even the infamous Tokyo. Everyone from that moment on split in their own directions. Sora Rika,and I decided that it would be best for us to go to school. We all enrolled in Tokyo High and passed the enterance exam. Sora became the star athlete and star preformer at our school. She is known as the envy of the school. As for Rika she participates in sports as well and acceled in her studies completly. She will end up graduating a year before Sora and I.

Eman became the President of a multi million dollar company in Tokyo as well. He enjoys his job at yelling at his underlings and rulling people with an Iron Fist. Though he still seems like a tyrant and a dictator Kazu's sacrafice did shake him. He is more tame now supprisingly well at least with us hehe. Yakate stayed at Sunagakure and became the mayor of the city. He loves that city with all his heart and spends most of his time writing. RK,Asako, and Surp all are working together in order to spread around the word of Kazu's sacrafice so that people will never make the same mistake again. They all worked together to publish his life story.... a biography of the legend himself.

Youji and Tsumi took the peace as a temporary break and decided to go traveling. They have been around the world countless times and have met a multitude of people. They still visit at holidays and bring us gifts. Laria continued her medical studies becoming a famous medical surgeon. She usually is sent to foreign places to preform surgeries that seem impossible. Temari travels along side her as he trusted nurse. Maru, and Ici decided that they would finally take a break from all the pointless fighting and decided to stay in the Ash village and start their family. The Xzeno's had changed their customs and became the only ninja clan allowed to keep their abilities. They in turn took it upon their own to protect the Mount of Gods. Now we get to the hard part.....Nen.

Nen took Kazuki's dissapearence hard. He secluded himself from everyone the first year training non stop. The kage summit offered to search for him but we decided against it. He eventually came back at the first year anniversary of kazu's sacrafice.~

The girl walks up meeting a large crowd of people in many different traditional gi's. The people here were the many people that she had spoken about as they were all dressed in the uniforms that they had stored away after the disbaning of the ninja. They all gathered around a large gate like structure as the looked up at the statue at the base of the stairs. A statue showing the image of their friend that had long been missing.

They payed their respects and shared their griefs and stories as they met up on this annual event. Suddenly they all turned once they saw Akane drop to the ground bawling like she did that day.

"KAZU!!!! YOU SAID YOU WOULD BE BACK!!! YOU SAID THAT YOU WOULD SURELY COME BACK ONCE THE WORLD WAS RESTORED! LOOK EVERYTHING IS NORMAL NOW. YOU ALWAYS CAME WHEN WE NEEDED YOU SO WHERE ARE YOU NOW? KAZU WE NEED YOU!!!! PLEASE!!!!!" Akane shouted at the top of her lungs as she cried sorrowfully as her friends crowded around her to comfort her.

The wind would then pick up as a headband would gently fly through the air. It flew over and landed around Akane's neck. She suddenly stopped crying as she looked at the headband.

"The Shikimori symbol?" Akane stated.

The gates opened as a figure stepped out of the bright light. His clothes were torn as he walked down the stairs towards the group of people. They all looked up in shock at first as the man spoke.

"What? No hey how was your trip Kazu?" Kazuki smiled as he laughed at his own joke.

Instead of laughing or scolding his horrible timing everyone simply shouted in unison.

"KAZU!!!!"

The crowd dashed up the stairs and tackled the young man to the ground hugging him. Kazuki smiled as he moved his way to Akane. With that he pulled her close and looked into her eyes.

"Told you I would be back." Kazuki said as he kissed her.


Last edited by kazuki shikimori on Sat Dec 12, 2009 10:23 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : added a little ^^)
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Sora ~Guardian of Dreams~

Sora ~Guardian of Dreams~


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It's really deep and sweet and I appreciate the part where you mentioned all of us in there. I liked how you really caught the essence of what friendship really is. ^^ Keep on writing Kazu.
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PostSubject: Re: The Warrior Cronicles: Revelation -finale-   The Warrior Cronicles: Revelation -finale- Icon_minitime1Fri Dec 11, 2009 11:29 pm

yayz ^^ thanks sora hehe
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Sora ~Guardian of Dreams~

Sora ~Guardian of Dreams~


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No problem. I like how I could imagine it, as if it were real. ^^
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Haku Shasa
Council of Four
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Haku Shasa


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PostSubject: Re: The Warrior Cronicles: Revelation -finale-   The Warrior Cronicles: Revelation -finale- Icon_minitime1Fri Dec 11, 2009 11:38 pm

Awesome story, I totally love it and totally love the names of us in the story.
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PostSubject: Re: The Warrior Cronicles: Revelation -finale-   The Warrior Cronicles: Revelation -finale- Icon_minitime1Sat Dec 12, 2009 12:04 am

Totally epic. O: The details were awesome. o.o; And how I sound like a lifeless hermit writing stuff. D: Episode format pwns. xD

Anyway, nice work! o.o
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PostSubject: Re: The Warrior Cronicles: Revelation -finale-   The Warrior Cronicles: Revelation -finale- Icon_minitime1Sat Dec 12, 2009 12:07 am

your not a lifeless hermit >.< your at peace and you are watching over sunagakure -.-
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Tsurenai Ryu
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Tsurenai Ryu


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Awwww!!!! I Love it!!!! That was soo sweet at the end!!!!! ^-^
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PostSubject: Re: The Warrior Cronicles: Revelation -finale-   The Warrior Cronicles: Revelation -finale- Icon_minitime1Sat Dec 12, 2009 10:29 am

Haha me quit fighting?! Never....Maybe xD

Good job.
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Kazuki Hatoba


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lol maru
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Hyosuke Asako

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PostSubject: Re: The Warrior Cronicles: Revelation -finale-   The Warrior Cronicles: Revelation -finale- Icon_minitime1Sat Dec 12, 2009 6:34 pm

I like the way how you make your story live and look like it could be something that could really happen in an anime series...xD Just a little disappointed I didn't become famous as medic, but it's okay ^^
I love the way how you pointed out some of our character traits in such short story. It's very well made, the details are very nice and I can't wait to read more coming from you.

See ya~
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PostSubject: Re: The Warrior Cronicles: Revelation -finale-   The Warrior Cronicles: Revelation -finale- Icon_minitime1Sat Dec 12, 2009 8:02 pm

Don't worry Asa I will specify your abilities within the story itself This is just the ending I am writing the whole story now.
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