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Surpentheon Fanglord
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Rank : Grand Sannin/Sage/Ex-Kage
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PostSubject: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:08 pm

"First of all..." He said looking down at her. "Call me Surp. Second, I have to see what you can do as of now. I made some clones here earlier. Find them, and destroy them using your abilities. This display will tell me what your jutsus are and what they can do. But also, what I will be able to teach you."

Clones: One lies under the water in the pond. Another in the trees behind the Mansion. And a third awaits inside the mansion itself. Obvious places to hide, but none the less, would take an effort to reach.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:37 pm

Asako groaned.
"Seriously Surp-sensei? I really don't feel like searching right now...Meh, this is so troublesome..."
The young girl rolled her eyes and went in direction of the pond, still looking bored.

Yawning, the young girl stopped in front of the pond, her hands in her pockets.
"Let's see how long he can stay underwater without breathing..."
The girl leaned against a tree that grew next to the water and waited calmly.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:39 pm

Clone 1: Showing no sign of having breathing problems, it waits to see what the young girl will do.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:53 pm

Asako yawned and stood up.
"Myeh, you're stubborn, huh? Oh well...Time for some chakra control exercice."
The young girl stretched and prepared a fist. Slowly, she poured chakra in it, making the amount big enough to create a little earthquake and destroy the earth in the lake.
"We'll see how this works..." she thought.
And she slammed the first on the ground. The earth cracked and exploded. Large blocks of earth flew in the air and the water of the lake began to derivate, emptying it, showing that there was a large damage at the bottom of it.
'If this didn't hurt him a lil, that will mean I lost my touch..." she thought, waiting for any responce coming from the clone.

Jutsu used:
Name: Chakra punch/kick
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Range: N/A
Description: The user pours chakra in it's leg or hand and arm and releases it right at the moment that he/she hits the target. The chakra makes the member more resistant and stronger.
(imagine Sakura in Shippuden...)
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:56 pm

Clone 1: As the water drains, the clone makes its way to the ponds opposite edge. It then uses its strength and flings itself up into the air. It soars high above Asa as if to take an air attack.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:13 pm

Asako sighed, made a few handseals and muttered:
"Blinding Light no Jutsu."
Suddenly, a huge light emaned from the sand kunoichi like a shield and she disappeared from the clone's view, blinding him at the same time with her jutsu.
Quickly, she made some other handsigns and whispered:
"Paralyzing Hand no Jutsu."
Then, she jumped right in front of the clone and tried to touch it's head with her hand full of deadly chakra...
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:15 pm

The clone can't see her and stumbles around frantic to recover its eyesight. He can't even see her hands coming towards him, this makes it impossible to block in his current position.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:18 pm

The Paralyzing Hand jutsu touches his forehead and the clone feels a huge shock and is killed...
Asako landed gracefully on the ground and yawned again.
"Boring...now the next one I guess..."
And the young girl headed over to the trees behind the mansion...

Jutu used in this and previous post:
Name: Paralyzing Hand
Rank: A/Forbidden
Element: None
Range: N/A
Description: The user pours pure chakra in the system of it's opponent by a simple touch of the abdomen or head of it's opponent. The opponent will feel a shock and dies in the next 5 seconds.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:21 pm

Clone 2: This clone watched and waited for Asa to come into its view from around the mansion. It waited ever so quietly and was alert to every sound it heard.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:27 pm

Asako had spotted the clone already. It's blood red hair just stood out between the green of the leafs.
The young girl took a stone she found on the ground and threw it in the opposite direction from where she was, hoping to distract the clone for a while, while she could hide in a nearby tree...
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:30 pm

Clone 2: Taking the bait, the clone looks breifly in that direction. But not for long, as it doesn't see her there. It continues to, ever alert and ready.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:32 pm

It gave Asako just enough time to hide behind the tree in which the clone was. Again, she gathered chakra in her fist and slammed it against the tree, breaking it almost in half and made it fall...

Jutsu used:
Name: Chakra punch/kick
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Range: N/A
Description: The user pours chakra in it's leg or hand and arm and releases it right at the moment that he/she hits the target. The chakra makes the member more resistant and stronger.
(imagine Sakura in Shippuden...)
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:35 pm

Clone 2: As he hears her fist connect with the tree, it leaps out of it and lands rolling onto the ground. He is up right away and ready for a follow-up attack.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:43 pm

Asako made a few handseals and whispered under her breath:
"Blinding Light no Jutsu."
And the same blinding light as before appeared and Asako used the time to flee and hide behind the clone, preparing another jutsu...
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:46 pm

Clone 2: This one was ready for this. It reacts by shutting its eyes as she goes to perform the attack. He then spin kicks at her legs after listening to her steps to where they ended behind him.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 7:01 pm

Asako dodged the attack and used a tree to jump against it, het fist full of chakra again and tried to aim for the clone's head, her other hand ready to be used with another jutsu...

Jutsu used:
Name: Chakra punch/kick
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Range: N/A
Description: The user pours chakra in it's leg or hand and arm and releases it right at the moment that he/she hits the target. The chakra makes the member more resistant and stronger.
(imagine Sakura in Shippuden...)
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 7:04 pm

Clone 2: Lightning erupts from its body, its color a blood red, and creates a wall between it and Asa. This wall has it's full electric property. Touching it would definately cause damage.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 7:08 pm

Asako uses the chakra in her fist and releases it before the skin touches the wall and uses it to push herself back right in time.
Landing on the ground, Asako punched the ground again, making it crack and destroys some trees at the same time around it by the small earthquake she made with it...
And using the opportunity, she used Blinding Light again, hoping to blind the clone...

Jutsus used:
Name: Chakra punch/kick
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Range: N/A
Description: The user pours chakra in it's leg or hand and arm and releases it right at the moment that he/she hits the target. The chakra makes the member more resistant and stronger.
(imagine Sakura in Shippuden...)

Name: Blinding Light
Rank: D
Element: Light
Range: Short
Describtion: It's a simple jutsu, that blinds the opponent for a few minutes. It's a perfect escape jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 7:11 pm

Clone 2: The wall of lightning digs itself into the ground and stops the earth from cracking past it. It the leaps back up but this time surrounds the clone in itself and then bursts out in a pulse like manner. A 360 degree attack of lighting. As it goes, it incinerates the trees and grass.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 7:50 pm

Asako jumped higher, using chakra in her legs and jumped off a tree she used right before it was destroyed by the lightning wave and tried to jump on the clone, her hand ready to stroke with another jutsu after she made a few handsigns...
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Fri Nov 06, 2009 11:22 pm

Clone 2: As the burst of lightning fades, the clone looks up to see her coming down towards him. His hands instantly blaze through a series of handsigns so fast, her eyes couldn't keep up. The clones mouth begins to spurt lightning from its sides. When he opens it and exhails a breath, A large bolt of lightning flies from his mouth instantly taking the form of a mighty, radiant dragon. The dragon flies at her, it fangs and claws looking to rip into her flesh. But it wasn't aimed at any vital parts. Just parts that could be easily healed yet still cause real pain.

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Lightning Dragon Flash- (C-Rank) similar to Dragon Flame Jutsu, this uses the same technique but utilizes the Lightning element for faster and more focused attack. This causes a blast of lightning to be emitted from the users’ mouth at speeds over 500 fps. The last image the opponents sees is a terrifying dragon about to consume them.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Sat Nov 07, 2009 12:16 pm

Asako made quickly a few handsigns and right before the jutsu hit her, she replaced herself with a tree log and used the half of the second that was left over for her to reappear behind the clone and trying to hit it with "Paralyzing Hand" again...


Jutsus used:

Name: Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Range: N/A
Description: The user replaces his/her body with a nearby object or another person just before getting hit or found.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Sat Nov 07, 2009 3:22 pm

Clone 2: It didn't expect her to use such an old jutsu and was slow to react. This in turn caused her attack to land without fault.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Sat Nov 07, 2009 3:25 pm

Asako used "Paralyzing Hand" on the clone. The clone felt a shock and fell on the ground, dead.

The young girl sighed and dusted her clothes off.
"They're getting tougher and toucher...Meh, if this goes on, I might get killed if I don't put some more energy in this..."
And on those words, she walked away, in the direction of the mansion...

Jutsu used:
Name: Paralyzing Hand
Rank: A/Forbidden
Element: None
Range: N/A
Description: The user pours pure chakra in the system of it's opponent by a simple touch of the abdomen or head of it's opponent. The opponent will feel a shock and dies in the next 5 seconds.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation Icon_minitime1Sat Nov 07, 2009 3:53 pm

Clone 3: Standing in the basement, open and in the center. This one is willing to show itself, as if it's unafraid.
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