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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Sat Nov 07, 2009 10:22 am

Clone 2: As the burst of lightning fades, the clone looks up to see her coming down towards him. His hands instantly blaze through a series of handsigns so fast, her eyes couldn't keep up. The clones mouth begins to spurt lightning from its sides. When he opens it and exhails a breath, A large bolt of lightning flies from his mouth instantly taking the form of a mighty, radiant dragon. The dragon flies at her, it fangs and claws looking to rip into her flesh. But it wasn't aimed at any vital parts. Just parts that could be easily healed yet still cause real pain.

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Lightning Dragon Flash- (C-Rank) similar to Dragon Flame Jutsu, this uses the same technique but utilizes the Lightning element for faster and more focused attack. This causes a blast of lightning to be emitted from the users’ mouth at speeds over 500 fps. The last image the opponents sees is a terrifying dragon about to consume them.

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Sat Nov 07, 2009 11:16 pm

Asako made quickly a few handsigns and right before the jutsu hit her, she replaced herself with a tree log and used the half of the second that was left over for her to reappear behind the clone and trying to hit it with "Paralyzing Hand" again...


Jutsus used:

Name: Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Range: N/A
Description: The user replaces his/her body with a nearby object or another person just before getting hit or found.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Sun Nov 08, 2009 2:22 am

Clone 2: It didn't expect her to use such an old jutsu and was slow to react. This in turn caused her attack to land without fault.

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Sun Nov 08, 2009 2:25 am

Asako used "Paralyzing Hand" on the clone. The clone felt a shock and fell on the ground, dead.

The young girl sighed and dusted her clothes off.
"They're getting tougher and toucher...Meh, if this goes on, I might get killed if I don't put some more energy in this..."
And on those words, she walked away, in the direction of the mansion...

Jutsu used:
Name: Paralyzing Hand
Rank: A/Forbidden
Element: None
Range: N/A
Description: The user pours pure chakra in the system of it's opponent by a simple touch of the abdomen or head of it's opponent. The opponent will feel a shock and dies in the next 5 seconds.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Sun Nov 08, 2009 2:53 am

Clone 3: Standing in the basement, open and in the center. This one is willing to show itself, as if it's unafraid.

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Sun Nov 08, 2009 3:14 am

Asako stared in the golden eyes of the clone with her jade ones.
"The first one, genin. The second one, chuunin. The third one, jounin I guess...This is such a bother. Fine. I'll end this one too if I can..."
She shook her head and leaned against a wall and yawned.
"I just don't feel like fighting you, but since I'm not such a coward either, we'll battle. I leave you the first move." she said, almost smiling.
And on those words, she got in a fighting stance...
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Sun Nov 08, 2009 3:50 am

Clone 3: Reaching to his sword, he readies his hand on its handle. He then launches himself forward heading straight for Asa.

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Sun Nov 08, 2009 4:28 am

Asako sighed and punched the ground with her fist, full of chakra and with all her strength. The ground shook, cracked and suddenly broke in a split of a second and rocks flew everywhere. Asako observed the clone, ready to dodge the next attack...
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Sun Nov 08, 2009 7:49 am

Clone 3: Watching her as she makes her punch, the clone jumps backward. Flipping in the air, he unsheaths his sword and when he does, a bright flash is emitted from its unsheathing. This flash only lasts but a fraction of a second. It washes over everything and vanishes just the same. But after the flash vanishes, the clone once again charges Asa moving easily past the obstacles she put in its way.

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Flash- (D-Rank) a genjutsu activated when I unsheath my sword. It creates a flash that I activate the genjutsu in. The Genjutsu is imprinted on the eye from the flash and this makes it harder to release. The opponent seems to still be in the real world but finds themself unable to beat the user of this jutsu by any means. I usually follow this jutsu with another to strike at them when their down.

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Sun Nov 08, 2009 9:31 pm

Immediatly the young girl closed her eyes, feeling the charka that was used to create the flash. She would have to rely on her ears only for a while and that was going to take a lot of concentration...
She heard the rocks flying around, the clone move on them, the sword get ready to strike...
"I already hate this fight..." she thought, waiting for the clone to strike...
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Sun Nov 08, 2009 10:50 pm

As he nears Asa, he swings his sword at her chest in a diagonal down strike. But he holds the tail of his sword in his opposite hand, ready to throw it and catch her if tried to escape. He wasn't gonna give her a choice it seemed. This one was after blood. He wasn't gonna settle for less. So now the mighty sword was bearing down and a secret attack lurked behind it.

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Sun Nov 08, 2009 11:13 pm

Asako used quickly the replacement jutsu again and disappeared out of the clone's view for a second. At the same time, she threw 3 poisoned needles at the clone (by hearing) and tried to get rid of the genjutsu by stabbing herself with a kunai. And right after that, she healed herself again, scared that the sent of blood would make the clone more agressive...
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Sun Nov 08, 2009 11:25 pm

The clones body opens and the needles pass through him without any harm. The clone then lands and the genjutsu is released. When she comes around, the clone stands a couple feet away from her electricity in both of his hands. Smirking he waits for her next move not catching wiff of the small blood.

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Sun Nov 08, 2009 11:36 pm

Asako made quickly a few hand signs, and made several clones of herself, encercling the enemy, trying to confuse him. Than, she made all the clones run in his direction and all preparing "Paralyzing Hand"...

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Name: Clone Technique
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Type: Ninjutsu
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Description: The user creates several intangible copies of him/her that disappear when damage is sustained.
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Sun Nov 08, 2009 11:40 pm

The clone vanishes entirely leaving only a burn mark on the ground where he stood as the clones made their way towards him. He then appeared up in the air. At that moment, he slammed his hands together forcing the electricity out of his hands. As it shot forth, it widened and spread till it covered further then the circle of clones. It would crash into the earth destroying all in its circle. Only a mighty crater would exist afterwards.

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Jutsus Used:

Denkousochi- (C-Rank) A technique he developed while doing his sage trials. He uses his bodies natural ability to focus and condense lightning in his body. After condensing and focusing, he then releases it in the opposite direction he wishes to move. When released, it causes the user to be propelled at the same speed the lightning is released. This enables the user to move faster than even the flicker technique. The drawback is, the user can't make sharp turns while in the middle of using this technique. Straight lines to slight curved is all this tech allows. It's level of mastery is decided by level. As the more you master it, the more control and training is needed.

Roar of a Thousand Birds- (A-Rank) By creating lightning in both hands, the user then slams their two hands together. The hands collide starting at the palms making a V. This shape allows a path for the lightning to escape. When the hands/palms collide, the lightning connects and is freed in a radical pattern. It then shoots out the hands in a wave-like pattern. ( < o O ) This attack was developed and evolved after watching Chidori.

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Mon Nov 09, 2009 12:01 am

Right before the jutsu could be completely executed, Asako used a replacement technique and hid somewhere in the room, waiting for the clone to end his jutsu and land on the ground...

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Mon Nov 09, 2009 12:03 am

Clone 3: The clone finshed his move leaving a huge crater in the floor. As he fell, he brought his arms in close and seemed to be readying something.

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Mon Nov 09, 2009 12:18 am

Asako stayed hidden, and didn't make a sound. She eve slowed down her breathing and prepared in silence a new jutsu...
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Mon Nov 09, 2009 12:23 am

The clone then expeled a thin layer of lightning from out of his entire body. It spread out from him and electrified the whole room. Everything was shocked. but not majorly. just a slight tingle was all it did.

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Hydro Lock- (C-Rank) The user expels a burst of static that covers the field and electrifies anything with water in it or on it. This acts as a solid defense for but a second and can be used to act as a targeting jutsu for other lightning moves.

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Mon Nov 09, 2009 12:41 am

Asako growled inwardly to the shock. It hurted her a little and gave her the strange feeling inside of her...
Quickly, the jade eyed young girl filled her fists full of chakra, jumped up and slammed them in the ground. The ground cracked and fell apart, showing the caves that were right under it...
Asako jumped quickly to the exit of the room and waited to see the result of her attack...
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